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Smooth
Hot steaming water
Ran into a bowl
Placed carefully on the bed
Careful not to spill it
Fresh razor in your hand
Shaving cream in the other
Careful lover not to nick me
Im trusting your steady hand
Foam realeased on my skin
Silky & creamy going up my spread legs
Til you reach your favorite place
Covering every hidden inch
Masterfully guiding the direction
Upward climb and downward descent
Smooth perfection by your hand
Shave me please Sir
Ran into a bowl
Placed carefully on the bed
Careful not to spill it
Fresh razor in your hand
Shaving cream in the other
Careful lover not to nick me
Im trusting your steady hand
Foam realeased on my skin
Silky & creamy going up my spread legs
Til you reach your favorite place
Covering every hidden inch
Masterfully guiding the direction
Upward climb and downward descent
Smooth perfection by your hand
Shave me please Sir
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Re: Smooth
23rd Nov 2014 9:00pm
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25th Nov 2014 6:08pm
Hahaha can i Sad? Ill keep that n mind darlin
Glad u liked my lik write
Glad u liked my lik write
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25th Nov 2014 6:08pm
Re: Smooth
23rd Nov 2014 11:52pm
That was a close one, beautiful Belle. You frequently say "Sir", and somehow that makes your lines all the sexier. Thank you, Madam.
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25th Nov 2014 6:13pm
Close n smooth darlin
Sir just seems to b the perfect punctuation to get my feelings across sometimes hun. Must b workn lol
Sir just seems to b the perfect punctuation to get my feelings across sometimes hun. Must b workn lol
Re: Smooth
24th Nov 2014 00:05am
This is such an intimate write. A peek into what lovers do. Sexy and Romantic Belle.
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25th Nov 2014 6:20pm
Very true X. Takes alot of trust to share this with another darlin. Glad u enjoyed it
Re: Smooth
24th Nov 2014 1:34am
Silky smooth words
From creamy white flesh
How you make hands
Want to carress
Sexy write, great imagery
From creamy white flesh
How you make hands
Want to carress
Sexy write, great imagery
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25th Nov 2014 6:35pm
Hot steaming water
Even hotter flesh
Special moments shared
With the one u truly trust
Thanx so much AS. Means alot hun
Even hotter flesh
Special moments shared
With the one u truly trust
Thanx so much AS. Means alot hun
Re: Smooth
24th Nov 2014 2:01am
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25th Nov 2014 6:37pm
Silky smooth is what i was goin for darlin
Always nice to know when ur goal is met
Always nice to know when ur goal is met
Re: Smooth
24th Nov 2014 4:37am
What fut...but way too much responsibility for me...I'm not know for steady hands :) Never the less fun to observe.
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25th Nov 2014 6:41pm
Always good to know ur limitations darlin
I agree sometimes watchin can b just as much fun
Accordin to the situation anyway lol
I agree sometimes watchin can b just as much fun
Accordin to the situation anyway lol
Re: Smooth
24th Nov 2014 3:15pm
Wow... I'm sure he'd want to perform flawlessly
But damn... It's a tough situation to deal with
becuz so many chances for a slip up...
Ouch, did my tongue just get nicked!? lol
But damn... It's a tough situation to deal with
becuz so many chances for a slip up...
Ouch, did my tongue just get nicked!? lol
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re: Re: Smooth
25th Nov 2014 6:43pm
Now now PM paatience darlin
No matter who u r shavin
It will work better for u both
If u finish up first sir lol
No matter who u r shavin
It will work better for u both
If u finish up first sir lol