Face it

Delicacies in nature..life..reality hits n its like u said shoulders straight face morning..i feel u

Thank you, Claire, so nice to hear that I managed to express the feeling...

This was expressed so well. It will help me 'Face morning' today. Thank you!

Thank you too, very much, it means a lot to me.

Well written. You have cheered my day!

Oh, so nice to me! Thanks, Romantic.

Thank you, Gabriel, appreciate your opinion very much!

Yup it's all you can do is keep on keeping on
n trying to maintain... Thoughtful stuff my dear :)

Thank you, always appreciate your words a lot...

That third stanza breaks my heart.  "Black swans killed."  That alone makes me cry.  I'm just glad there's some flicker of strength in the last stanza, albeit guarded as the voice faces morning.  I try to keep moving myself.  Anyway, "Face It" reflects courage.  It has a strong economy of words and imagery.  Really fine work.

Yes, I think we must do our best to be brave and keep moving. Thank you for your beautiful and touching comment...

nihilism [&] hope conflate in this piece, with stunningly surreal effects.

tiny critique... i'd [suggest] switching beautiful & little in L1.

a really great write silva.  

Thank you so much, for the critique too :)