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Knowing
If in the same room
There would be no need for words
We would just know
Our eyes saying it all
Reading eachother's thoughts
Lingering passions shared by two
Long stem wishes
Satin sheet dreams
Counting stars out my bedroom window
A certain satisfaction in knowing
They are the twinkling diamonds
Watching over you as well
This is an ode to you
My all knowing lover
Sleep well tonight Sir knowing
No man has touched as you have
There would be no need for words
We would just know
Our eyes saying it all
Reading eachother's thoughts
Lingering passions shared by two
Long stem wishes
Satin sheet dreams
Counting stars out my bedroom window
A certain satisfaction in knowing
They are the twinkling diamonds
Watching over you as well
This is an ode to you
My all knowing lover
Sleep well tonight Sir knowing
No man has touched as you have
Published 7th Nov 2014
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7th Nov 2014 2:45pm
12th Nov 2014 4:44pm
7th Nov 2014 3:42pm
Satin sheet dreams" evokes such delicious images of hoped for events. The stars as a cosmic unifier of souls is a beautiful idea. Bravisima bella poeta!
12th Nov 2014 4:46pm
12th Nov 2014 8:11pm
12th Nov 2014 8:16pm
7th Nov 2014 4:37pm
This is incredibly beautiful. "Sleep well tonight Sir knowing/No man has touched as you have" is the perfect goodnight.
12th Nov 2014 4:47pm
7th Nov 2014 9:36pm
Trapped into the empty Grey eyes
Emotionless escape
Into the bindings
Of feeling that obey
Emotionless escape
Into the bindings
Of feeling that obey
12th Nov 2014 6:59pm
Oh AS how i love ur words
Often they r so much better than what i wrote myself
Often they r so much better than what i wrote myself
7th Nov 2014 9:54pm
"No man has touched as you have" - can have more than one meaning in such an evocative poem.
12th Nov 2014 7:01pm
Anonymous
7th Nov 2014 10:31pm
Belle,
A beautifully written ode! Loved your line:
"There would be no need for words"
for passion is it's own language, spoken silently by lovers.
Enjoyed!
tornado
A beautifully written ode! Loved your line:
"There would be no need for words"
for passion is it's own language, spoken silently by lovers.
Enjoyed!
tornado
12th Nov 2014 7:07pm
Our sexuality is more than just the physical
The meeting of two minds is sexier than any naked body to me.
Glad u liked it darlin
The meeting of two minds is sexier than any naked body to me.
Glad u liked it darlin
7th Nov 2014 11:09pm
12th Nov 2014 7:19pm
Mr Feddeler to look into my eyes is to look into the flames of passion itself
Glad u enjoyed my lil write hun
Glad u enjoyed my lil write hun
8th Nov 2014 1:57am
Kindred spirits in tune to each other's thoughts and feelings. Soul Mates. Nice write Belle.
12th Nov 2014 7:23pm
Kindred spirits r so rare. If u r lucky enough to find her dear X dont let her go
Thanx for the read darlin
Thanx for the read darlin
22nd Nov 2014 5:12am
I do love this poem of yours so much, Belle! It is very warm and filled with your trademark sensuality, but it is tender and loving first and foremost, which appeals to the romantic in me quite strongly. My favorite section is this:
"Counting stars out my bedroom window
A certain satisfaction in knowing
They are the twinkling diamonds
Watching over you as well"
That conjures such beautiful images in my mind, of stars, and warmth, and love, that it makes me swoon with how amazing your verses are! Great work, fantastic poetry. :D
"Counting stars out my bedroom window
A certain satisfaction in knowing
They are the twinkling diamonds
Watching over you as well"
That conjures such beautiful images in my mind, of stars, and warmth, and love, that it makes me swoon with how amazing your verses are! Great work, fantastic poetry. :D
