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You Promised
"i love you"
"i'll never leave you"
"me and you 4ever baby"
you lied
you left me
you came back
"i never stopped loving you"
how do i know it's true
you promised me
you'd stay
but i still doubt
i still
love you
but do you
really
love me?
"i'll never leave you"
"me and you 4ever baby"
you lied
you left me
you came back
"i never stopped loving you"
how do i know it's true
you promised me
you'd stay
but i still doubt
i still
love you
but do you
really
love me?
Published 22nd Apr 2011
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22nd Apr 2011 11:27pm
23rd Apr 2011 3:31am
its just something i thought of, when you think about it, not alot of poems are actually "poems"
24th Apr 2011 8:08pm
hmmm this reminds me of a certain thing that happened to me- i know the feeling! well written!
25th Apr 2011 3:29am
30th Apr 2011 2:39am
i like it :) who cares if its diff. format or whatever, its different and differents always good. simple but also shows the common emotions we go through when in love.
30th Apr 2011 2:56am
30th Apr 2011 3:14am
ur welcome yeah to me it isn't the format or rhyming that matters, as long as it's something you mean or that kind of thing.
30th Apr 2011 3:15am
like my poems rhyme, but that's just cause i'm better that way than freestyle. everyone's got diff. styles
30th Apr 2011 4:14am
30th Apr 2011 5:19pm
yeah that's kinda why i like it, it makes me think more about how to write it
