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Excavate
I've looked into your soul many times
tonight though your glistening eyes are different
hear your heart beating so softly
like a whisper of luv spoken with just a look
sending notions of a fantasy not yet shared
a dream you wish to make come true
your softer touch in my intimate places
tells me your mind set to explore
well here I am......excavate
tonight though your glistening eyes are different
hear your heart beating so softly
like a whisper of luv spoken with just a look
sending notions of a fantasy not yet shared
a dream you wish to make come true
your softer touch in my intimate places
tells me your mind set to explore
well here I am......excavate
Published 5th Nov 2014
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5th Nov 2014 7:47pm
This is outstanding. No poem response from me on this one, dare not touch the thread of this lovely lace you have framing this beautiful piece.
8th Nov 2014 10:27pm
Sweet Soul......you make me blush.....your precious words touch me where silence lives. Thank you so very much. Xo :)
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6th Nov 2014 3:41am
"A dream you wish to make come true." Sounds good to me. Kind of my situation at this point.
Awe crowfly......I hope your dreams come true.....keep smiling towards tomorrow.....don't ever stop believing.....cause it's a miserable place to be....smile thru the pain and want. Thank you for a thought provoking comment. Xo :)
6th Nov 2014 6:28am
Thank you Fenom.....glad you enjoyed......there is no other way to be.....just blurt it on out. LOL!!! Xo :)
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17th Jun 2016 10:09pm
Short, sweet, sensual, ending on an earthy note I'm sure would appeal to his proverbial tool.
I wonder if Agatha Christie, who was married to an archaeologist, might have used such a poem in her married life. She it was who said a woman would be happiest marrying an archaeologist because as she grew older she would find him more interesting!
I wonder if Agatha Christie, who was married to an archaeologist, might have used such a poem in her married life. She it was who said a woman would be happiest marrying an archaeologist because as she grew older she would find him more interesting!
