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*Loving You
Loving you was beautiful
your words soothing caresses
upon my mind and heart
you carried me over galaxies
of adventures within myself
finding out the desires embedded
within waiting to awake
over the threshold of desires
flame ablazed blooming and bursting
engulfing us in its entirety
a bonfire of loving lusts
reaching into the skies
burning everything on the way
it was us within the pyre
The blindness caught up with us
the bonfire finally turn to mere flickers
in feeding each other we forgot
the cracks and the scars
inflicted by our greed
scatches and abrasions of selfishness
personality clashed and differences collided
Lies applied to smoothen cracks
Lies told to balm the hurts
love couldn't go any deeper
than scrabbling carnal desire
nights filled with desperate couplings
didn't erase the days' indifference
Humpty Dumpty crashed down the wall
a cool morning on a Monday
it was a silent goodbye
you didn't say a word
nothing left to say
A new beginning
for me I didn't know
where to start again.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. Thank you for reading.*
your words soothing caresses
upon my mind and heart
you carried me over galaxies
of adventures within myself
finding out the desires embedded
within waiting to awake
over the threshold of desires
flame ablazed blooming and bursting
engulfing us in its entirety
a bonfire of loving lusts
reaching into the skies
burning everything on the way
it was us within the pyre
The blindness caught up with us
the bonfire finally turn to mere flickers
in feeding each other we forgot
the cracks and the scars
inflicted by our greed
scatches and abrasions of selfishness
personality clashed and differences collided
Lies applied to smoothen cracks
Lies told to balm the hurts
love couldn't go any deeper
than scrabbling carnal desire
nights filled with desperate couplings
didn't erase the days' indifference
Humpty Dumpty crashed down the wall
a cool morning on a Monday
it was a silent goodbye
you didn't say a word
nothing left to say
A new beginning
for me I didn't know
where to start again.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. Thank you for reading.*
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