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If I Seduced Prometheus
I'd suck the air from his kiss,
the heat from his kiln, leave him
stone-headed deafness in false ecstasy.
I'd rip my face off and reform the underlying clay
into the visage of daimona Aletheia,
desolate in her guardianship.
I'd bake in the remaining flames, those last echoes
of lies I told myself, clawing past wastelands
in search of purity
though I have spat in every well,
unwilling to believe in starred reflections
within.
I'd leave tears and ash —
volcanic streaks warning no one.
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Re: If I Seduced Prometheus
31st Oct 2014 5:01am
I can't entirely relate, but I dig what was brought to mind. Poignant delivery, me likey a lot.
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Re: If I Seduced Prometheus
31st Oct 2014 5:02am
Violent seduction. Wow! I really like how you've penned this. Colourful, powerful language, dragging the reader in, kicking and maybe screaming, for a mind blowing ride. :) Absolutely enjoyed this.
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Re: If I Seduced Prometheus
31st Oct 2014 10:58pm
Atakti I love the angry, fiery seduction boil and eat um up.. great imagery with love and respect Crim
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Re: If I Seduced Prometheus
1st Nov 2014 1:41am
(Points finger)-"AN UNBELIEVER!!!"
*Gritty stuff-Like spitting nails and flame*
Excellence-Always!!!
*Gritty stuff-Like spitting nails and flame*
Excellence-Always!!!
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Re: If I Seduced Prometheus
1st Nov 2014 2:45pm
I n c r e d i b l e ink , my friend!!
Metaphorically speaking...unleashed, raw, and powerful passion--crossing over just enough into the darker side.
One of your absolute best!
(A well-deserved place in my reading list!)
Metaphorically speaking...unleashed, raw, and powerful passion--crossing over just enough into the darker side.
One of your absolute best!
(A well-deserved place in my reading list!)
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Re: If I Seduced Prometheus
1st Nov 2014 9:37pm
Spectacular writing that displays an in your face analogy, for the gods must be crazy to try and survive your pen. You’re a Titan to be reckoned with and a pure inspiration. Excellent.
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2nd Nov 2014 00:11am
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Re: If I Seduced Prometheus
3rd Nov 2014 5:22pm
Titan manipulator! Stealing star-fire from the fire thief.. quickly, give me a moon-mask so I may hide! Rebel with a flaw? You only get better with your poems and imagery dear.
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Re: If I Seduced Prometheus
9th Nov 2014 9:49pm
Prometheus, what a god! The dude stole fire from Zeus and gave it back to man! If you were to seduce Prometheus, apparently he's into chains... enough!
I fricken love this poem, I love it! Every line is packed with powerful imagery, especially the second last, I can see fiery Atakti spitting in wells. It's kinda defying Zeus... I am the flame, I have no master and I fear nothing.
I fricken love this poem, I love it! Every line is packed with powerful imagery, especially the second last, I can see fiery Atakti spitting in wells. It's kinda defying Zeus... I am the flame, I have no master and I fear nothing.
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7th Jun 2015 10:13am