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Lovely Little Girl
What a lovely little girl you are. Would you please just look in my mirror? Look at yourself, you pitiful fool. Look at your red face. Watch the tears you pour every night. Small fluid flecks that rip up the pretty perfection you painted on only moments before. What a mess. You never were a graceful crier. In fact, even when you learned how to silence your sobs in the girls bathroom, you still trembled and gaped your mouth open for the air you couldn't seem to inhale. Fat. See that your face is fat and blotched with hues ranging from a rose pink to the lovely tomato red. Such a disgrace. Look at your shirt! Damn it girl! Look what you've done to that poor innocent blouse. Now soiled with the same chalky eye shadow and liner that you'd caked on to impress. You've become a problematic eyesore in only a matter of moments.
Don't look away! Look in my mirror, and then you'll see the lips that kissed every boy goodbye. Arms trembling violently, you know, the same arms that pushed him away. See those legs? Those legs you shaved, waxed, and tanned to play as a troubling temptation. Well now see them bruised, sliced, and paled. What a little whore you acted to be. Well a little tease is all I see. That chest, now littered with scars and scratches, heaving with sob after sob. Are you proud of the extra fat that now hangs on you? Where are your bones you wretch? Look at the way your stomach rounds and your ass wobbles. Shouldn't you be flat and tight? Where does that food go dear?
Did I say you could look away? Little bitch look at those eyes! Look where you hide all your desires and lies. See those sinful hopes of other lovers and indecent actions. Why is it so dark? Can you look at yourself in the light sweetie, or do you see yourself not so sweet? Look at those hands. They are so cold and long. Remember the way you gave in? Do you still feel him on your hands? Do you still taste the others on you lips? What is wrong dear? Are you not still their lovely little girl?
Don't look away! Look in my mirror, and then you'll see the lips that kissed every boy goodbye. Arms trembling violently, you know, the same arms that pushed him away. See those legs? Those legs you shaved, waxed, and tanned to play as a troubling temptation. Well now see them bruised, sliced, and paled. What a little whore you acted to be. Well a little tease is all I see. That chest, now littered with scars and scratches, heaving with sob after sob. Are you proud of the extra fat that now hangs on you? Where are your bones you wretch? Look at the way your stomach rounds and your ass wobbles. Shouldn't you be flat and tight? Where does that food go dear?
Did I say you could look away? Little bitch look at those eyes! Look where you hide all your desires and lies. See those sinful hopes of other lovers and indecent actions. Why is it so dark? Can you look at yourself in the light sweetie, or do you see yourself not so sweet? Look at those hands. They are so cold and long. Remember the way you gave in? Do you still feel him on your hands? Do you still taste the others on you lips? What is wrong dear? Are you not still their lovely little girl?
Published 30th Oct 2014
| Edited 31st Oct 2014
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30th Oct 2014 4:54pm
30th Oct 2014 4:56pm
Anonymous
30th Oct 2014 7:39pm
Wow.. Really enjoyed this... Well written, loved your choice of words and the descriptiveness.. To me it's about the inner conflict inside us all.. Like having two voices in your head, that play tug of war with your emotions.. And you're stuck in the middle of this war.. Just an opinion.. But I really loved this piece.. Thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
31st Oct 2014 00:59am
i like the last paragraph which states the contradiction. It's something that happens in my life but i just can't put it into words, and this is perfect...if i changed every 'girl'
to 'boy' and made other amendments XD
to 'boy' and made other amendments XD
31st Oct 2014 1:32pm
