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We Are One....
one soul.....one spirit
that's us for sure
for more than a second in time
my desire is to feel your sigh
blown across my skin
forever past tomorrow
sweating skin press upon my flesh
heating me inside and out
warmness from your kiss melting my senses
will you kiss my soul with yours tonight
ravish me with your gorgeous green eyes
I need to know.....will you luv me.....as I imagine me luving you
that's us for sure
for more than a second in time
my desire is to feel your sigh
blown across my skin
forever past tomorrow
sweating skin press upon my flesh
heating me inside and out
warmness from your kiss melting my senses
will you kiss my soul with yours tonight
ravish me with your gorgeous green eyes
I need to know.....will you luv me.....as I imagine me luving you
Published 28th Oct 2014
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28th Oct 2014 1:31pm
29th Oct 2014 3:14pm
28th Oct 2014 3:21pm
29th Oct 2014 3:15pm
The smile you have put upon my heart with these words.....priceless. Thank you! Xo :)
28th Oct 2014 7:30pm
I NEARLY saw my skin peel off
in search of the soul
where was it
your poetry is pure magic
even I stood by
in salute
as the soul flew by
in the nude
see it
did any one of you
must have rained
twas totally wet!
in search of the soul
where was it
your poetry is pure magic
even I stood by
in salute
as the soul flew by
in the nude
see it
did any one of you
must have rained
twas totally wet!
29th Oct 2014 3:17pm
Again......your smile upon my page warms my heart......your words have touched me. Glad you're enjoying the magic. Thank you! Xo :)
30th Oct 2014 2:38am
29th Oct 2014 1:33am
29th Oct 2014 3:18pm
I'm so glad you are enjoying my writes again.......it feels great to write them once more. Thank you for the luv and support. Xo :)
29th Oct 2014 10:30pm
30th Oct 2014 00:04am
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22nd Jan 2015 1:10am
Oh how you do make me blush Sweet S.......I feel very encouraged by your luving words......honored by the RL add on.....luv and hugs...xo :)
