A loan [alone]

if he doesn't give
it back then break it,
and let him cut himself
on the shattered
remains...

or alternatively, kick
him on the shin and
then just take it..:)

I will take it form him, I think,
after he has cut himself and
after I have kicked him
on the shin :-). Nasty Chi ...
Thank you so much, Paul, for the good ideas and the consoling words :-).

Revenge kinda write

Like

Words can be so useful
and releaving.
Thanks, Speak :-).

beautiful work, Chi. hoping it's still in one piece...

Thank you so much, John, yes, it is. But not his shin :-) *justjoking*

Cool. Like it

Thank you for stopping by, PinkSakura, and reading my poem. Thanks, too, for the cool comment :-).

Great poem Chiyo! You have to give it in order to find the true one however

Thank you so much LSP! You surely know about true love and broken hearts :-). We always want our hearts to remain whole. We want to love and be loved but no risk, if possible :-).

Oh yea sure ask for back after I done
hurt by accident, I never meant to
beat so fast u could barely breath
Thump so hard, it'd cracked your rib...
Huh? Wha? Oopsie! Wrong poem huh?
lol...jk... Sometimes we just to laugh
to keep from cryin... :)

Are you okay, babe? Wrong poem? Hahaha! Shit happens. But thanks nonetheless :-).

Miss Chi,

Even with a loaner, it sometimes comes down to repossession. Take it, don't look back, you are the strength!

tornado

Hehe, a loaner :-). Sweet :-).
He won't let me go ...

Puppet on a string
or mistress of your fate seems
to be the question ;-)

Ahhh...no puppet on a string
but somehow still
attached.

The keepers of Our hearts but only for awhile, like a loan. Enjoyed it Chi.

Exactly ... Our hearts are only loans and we should withdraw them when treated carelessly. Glad you enjoyed it, xmar82. I enjoyed your kind comment :-).

I would inspect the heart first before taking it back!

And hold the keeper responsible for any damage caused? Manhood would need heart insurance ... :-). Thanks for your valuable suggestion!

Such a strong write Miss Chi,but mighty sad :(

Poems are made to express feelings, dear Hashman, and only the sad ones were available at that moment :-(.

I relate to your truth, Miss Chi, knowing the truth is always hidden, but I feel the warmth.(there's a lot of laughter in there)and no one should take that with spite. Great little piece of absolution, and I think you're awesome.

Thank you so much, dear Pish.  Absolution. I think you have to be very special to give absolution to someone who hurt you profoundly. I'm trying hard. Thank you so much for thinking I'm awesome. It warms my heart, be sure of that.

This speaks to me Ms. Chi, tis was the season it seems where gifts were taken for granted, no one should mistaken kindness for weakness!!

Thank you, vee, for your welcome and very kind comment. It would be stupid to mistaken kindness for weakness. One might fall flat on one's face.

Love is a double edged sword. Hugs.

It is, dear Sara. It slashes incurable wounds, as we both know ...
Thanks for the hug :-).

Miss Chi,  
  Your poems are so insightful in our carnal desires, the pleasures, pains and lust. Such deep thoughts, I would imagine can only come from experiencing the emotion?  I do enjoy your poems,  
     Thank You.  
 

I have to thank you, Nobodyinparticular.
I'm glad that you enjoyed my poems and humbled by your kind words :-).
Don't we all write out of the heart?