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Man Enough
Are you strong enough to be my man?
Take control of me Sir
Show me that you are
I only want you pleased
I want all of your urges
Sated within my touch
Unleash your fantasies and lust
I long to satisfy them ALL
What would you have me do first?
I'm standing bare before you
Your ever trusting lil grl
I hope every inch of me meets your approval
Whisper into my ear
Tell me my instructions please
Nothing is off the table
As you are so very aware of
Are you man enough to be my MAN?
If so then you also understand
There are times that a woman needs a soft touch
Do you Sir have that within you too?
I cannot wait to find out
Just where this will lead us
I hope you feel the same excitement as I do
Plesse come and share your thoughts with me please
Take control of me Sir
Show me that you are
I only want you pleased
I want all of your urges
Sated within my touch
Unleash your fantasies and lust
I long to satisfy them ALL
What would you have me do first?
I'm standing bare before you
Your ever trusting lil grl
I hope every inch of me meets your approval
Whisper into my ear
Tell me my instructions please
Nothing is off the table
As you are so very aware of
Are you man enough to be my MAN?
If so then you also understand
There are times that a woman needs a soft touch
Do you Sir have that within you too?
I cannot wait to find out
Just where this will lead us
I hope you feel the same excitement as I do
Plesse come and share your thoughts with me please
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Re: Man Enough
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2014 9:12pm
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24th Oct 2014 6:04pm
U always pick out my pesonally favorite lines lol
Glad u liked it hun
Glad u liked it hun
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24th Oct 2014 8:41pm
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23rd Oct 2014 10:06pm
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24th Oct 2014 6:11pm
Well my dear friend i truly believe
If we r not honest with eachother about our needs
Both people r getting cheated
If we r not honest with eachother about our needs
Both people r getting cheated
Re: Man Enough
23rd Oct 2014 11:58pm
This is a fabulous poem and what every. man would want to hear. I really enjoyed it and will re read it many timesf. You are on a special journey enjoy the ride
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re: Re: Man Enough
24th Oct 2014 6:07pm
Thank u darlin
Im glad it the spot for u hun
Im humbled by ur wondeful comment
Ty again
Im glad it the spot for u hun
Im humbled by ur wondeful comment
Ty again
Re: Man Enough
24th Oct 2014 00:16am
a lot of questions, but you probably already have the answers. sex can be tender or a little more aggressive, it's all pleasurable...
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re: Re: Man Enough
24th Oct 2014 6:20pm
Oh i definitely agree Mr Feddeler
Sometimes pleasure n pain walk hand n hand
Sometimes pleasure n pain walk hand n hand
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24th Oct 2014 2:03am
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24th Oct 2014 6:24pm
Unsure from the comment whether u liked it
Hope u did hun
Thanx for the read
Hope u did hun
Thanx for the read
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24th Oct 2014 3:15am
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Re: Man Enough
24th Oct 2014 4:57pm
You present yourself, in this piece, as a beautiful blank canvas awaiting the artists brush strokes. Oh to pick up that palette and paint :) Brava LSB!
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24th Oct 2014 6:27pm
Re: Man Enough
I'll say that every inch of your poem meets my approval. The rest I'll just have to use my imagination. Being a southern belle you might like to check out one I posted today in the "dark" category called "Belle Fire." It's pretty bizarre, but it's based on an actual experience. Like to know what you think.
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24th Oct 2014 8:55pm
Well darlin lll gladly comply n scoot right over n give it a read
Glad u enjoyedy lil write
Thanx for giving me a read
Glad u enjoyedy lil write
Thanx for giving me a read
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24th Oct 2014 10:31pm