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Sad
the yellow sun
in the morning
all the songs
we used to sing
drizzles of rain
with the sun shining
a single leaf falling
drones of an airplane
they are sad
sounds
sad sights
evoking sad
thoughts
I was happy then.
in the morning
all the songs
we used to sing
drizzles of rain
with the sun shining
a single leaf falling
drones of an airplane
they are sad
sounds
sad sights
evoking sad
thoughts
I was happy then.
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Re: Sad
18th Oct 2014 1:22pm
Re: Sad
Anonymous
18th Oct 2014 3:00pm
Much enjoyed this piece, dear Grace...
Yes, it always is the sound that comes before the sense, almost asif it shows you the way....
Yes, it always is the sound that comes before the sense, almost asif it shows you the way....
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re: Re: Sad
18th Oct 2014 3:15pm
Thank you, kind Mourganna, for reading. You know about the way, because you hear it within.:)
re: Re: Sad
18th Oct 2014 11:03pm
Re: Sad
Anonymous
18th Oct 2014 11:38pm
Short but to the point. Nostalgia... Excellent, Grace!
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re: Re: Sad
19th Oct 2014 6:25pm