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Unfettered Passion
Oh persistent passion, unfettered
how it singes the soul true
it's like a shiny lining
in thy star-crossed silvery
view I've seen of you
An ocean blue, sparkling
in my eyes I cry endless tears
long overdue...
you see, we never knew
that passionate quiver
and yet, I shiver thru and thru
with an incredulous joy...
as your love toys with emotions
run rampant within this space
of mine...you doing, whatever
it is you do while you're cueing
me on Que...
it's insane, these loving thee things
you do...oh damn springed-free lover, how you imbue...
feed me with wanton urges
to feed upon you
with a flame
birthed in unquenchable desire
and as I fall, I soar up higher
and higher, dropping lust filled thoughts into ecstasy's molten ire
living, dying and reliving a rebirth
of a long since silenced fire...
*no, that pic. Is not of my design
saw it loved it so I used it as inspiration lol*
how it singes the soul true
it's like a shiny lining
in thy star-crossed silvery
view I've seen of you
An ocean blue, sparkling
in my eyes I cry endless tears
long overdue...
you see, we never knew
that passionate quiver
and yet, I shiver thru and thru
with an incredulous joy...
as your love toys with emotions
run rampant within this space
of mine...you doing, whatever
it is you do while you're cueing
me on Que...
it's insane, these loving thee things
you do...oh damn springed-free lover, how you imbue...
feed me with wanton urges
to feed upon you
with a flame
birthed in unquenchable desire
and as I fall, I soar up higher
and higher, dropping lust filled thoughts into ecstasy's molten ire
living, dying and reliving a rebirth
of a long since silenced fire...
*no, that pic. Is not of my design
saw it loved it so I used it as inspiration lol*
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Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 12:49pm
A rebirth of that fire should be a must...enjoyed the read, talented Poetik.:)
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re: Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 12:51pm
Sweet grace... *bowing* I bid you hello
n a multitude of gratitude too! lol
Thank you so much my dear lady... :)
n a multitude of gratitude too! lol
Thank you so much my dear lady... :)
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re: Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 1:25pm
Yea, me too although I usually do my own photograpy
or paintings/drawings lol I just felt lazy this time lol
Thank u my dear, so sweet to see u here again :)
or paintings/drawings lol I just felt lazy this time lol
Thank u my dear, so sweet to see u here again :)
Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 1:39pm
re: Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 2:03pm
Oh yea, proves we must be twins huh? lol
Thanks a heap bro! Much appreciated :)
Thanks a heap bro! Much appreciated :)
Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 2:11pm
To have ones passionate kisses
A fuel that burns another's desires
That is chemistry that will not be
Resisted
Or forgotten
Powerful piece
A fuel that burns another's desires
That is chemistry that will not be
Resisted
Or forgotten
Powerful piece
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re: Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 2:19pm
So true my friend, but on the flip side
to have n no outlet is equally unforgettable lol
Thanks as always for your support of my ink :)
to have n no outlet is equally unforgettable lol
Thanks as always for your support of my ink :)
re: re: Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 6:49pm
Understood my friend, I have no illusion that the wet passion cooled the flames... For it keeping it strangling strong, as you mentioned.
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Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 3:06pm
This ardent and passionate write struck a chord with me, Poe, since it reveals so much feeling and insight in love-tortured souls. Like it a lot!
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re: Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 3:23pm
Yes you know that feeling I'm sure y sweetness
n yet like many we endeavor to continue
that search huh? Thanks for always supporting my ink
it's deeply appreciated :)
n yet like many we endeavor to continue
that search huh? Thanks for always supporting my ink
it's deeply appreciated :)
Re: Unfettered Passion
12th Oct 2014 4:18pm
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12th Oct 2014 6:49pm
Why I thank u kindly! n yea I shall try to be inspired
as much as possible :)
as much as possible :)
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13th Oct 2014 5:11am
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13th Oct 2014 6:51am
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13th Oct 2014 6:48am
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13th Oct 2014 6:53am
Just broke a swear huh? Damn, back to the 'drooling board' lol
Thank you my sweetie I appreciate u much :)
Thank you my sweetie I appreciate u much :)
re: Re: Unfettered Passion
13th Oct 2014 1:00pm
Aaawwww thank u! Truly appreciate your reading n leaving
a thought on my ink :)
a thought on my ink :)
re: Re: Unfettered Passion
13th Oct 2014 2:44pm
Thank you my friend, I'm pleased you liked
n appreciate your support always! :)
n appreciate your support always! :)
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15th Oct 2014 5:14am
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15th Oct 2014 5:48am
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15th Oct 2014 12:34pm
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15th Oct 2014 12:47pm
Mmmmm I love when my ink
gets you goin mami! lol
Thank you so much sweetheart always :)
gets you goin mami! lol
Thank you so much sweetheart always :)
Re: Unfettered Passion
15th Oct 2014 6:27pm
This stanza is my favorite...something about the doing whatever...on que!
"as your love toys with emotions
run rampant within this space
of mine...you doing, whatever
it is you do while you're cueing
me on Que... "
"as your love toys with emotions
run rampant within this space
of mine...you doing, whatever
it is you do while you're cueing
me on Que... "
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Re: Unfettered Passion
16th Oct 2014 8:04pm
Hey there ol' friend its wonderful to read your writing again. I have been writing again myself. I really enjoyed this piece Poetik, what inspired you to write such moving ink?
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Re: Unfettered Passion
16th Oct 2014 9:18pm
Hey my dear! all nothing based on life, just my usual dreaming self lol... Glad to hear from u again, n thanks I appreciate you much n shall shoot over ur way ASAP :)