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kill me
kill me
I just can't live anymore
im prepared to die
I cant live with my heart sore
kill me
save me from this hell
my life sucks
I need to be killed
kill me
help a emo
save him from his life
that he can not bare
kill me
answer my pleas
I gave up all i had left
it hurts for me to breathe
kill me
why must I beg
my heart is gone
broken,beaten, and dead
I just can't live anymore
im prepared to die
I cant live with my heart sore
kill me
save me from this hell
my life sucks
I need to be killed
kill me
help a emo
save him from his life
that he can not bare
kill me
answer my pleas
I gave up all i had left
it hurts for me to breathe
kill me
why must I beg
my heart is gone
broken,beaten, and dead
Published 15th Apr 2011
| Edited 21st Apr 2011
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2011 7:52am
You have a problem with your I's! Plus:
it hearts for me to breathe
it should be:
it hurts for me to breathe
not hearts = hurts
other than that a good read 3/5 stars!
You just have more of the same errors...
it hearts for me to breathe
it should be:
it hurts for me to breathe
not hearts = hurts
other than that a good read 3/5 stars!
You just have more of the same errors...
21st Apr 2011 12:05pm
21st Apr 2011 12:16pm
