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confused mind
A confused mind
can barely write these lines
only knows its time
for a change
to stop the pain
that builds inside
A confused mind
prepared to fight
doesn't know whats right
Still with the pain
wishes it would go away
needs a piece of paradise
can barely write these lines
only knows its time
for a change
to stop the pain
that builds inside
A confused mind
prepared to fight
doesn't know whats right
Still with the pain
wishes it would go away
needs a piece of paradise
Published 13th Apr 2011
| Edited 10th Jun 2012
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17th Oct 2012 3:15am
Thank you, glad to see that one of my older and more popular works is still being enjoyed.
