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An ode to certain penises
I have a very specific yen
You see
For men who tend to be
Small
Or even
Average
Let me be plain
For I want
No
Misconceptions
Nor
Missed perceptions
I'm talking penises here
I want you small or even average sized
Just big enough, you see, for truly sensitive play
Please, oh please, make my day
I'd like you in my mouth
Completely with ease
I'll have your balls as well
To tease
I'd like to take you all the way
Spend hours having you stay
Right in my mouth...
Yet,
I also enjoy you in my pussy, luv
Please glide right in
You feel just right
You move with ease
Touch all the right spots
Hit all my buttons
Ride me so... Mmm... (I'm getting wet, dripping honey, just thinking about you in me)
You make me clench you so tightly
Pussy muscles squeezing you relentlessly (can't help myself, you know?)
If you have finesse
I'm doubly blessed
For none can surpass
A small or average man who knows
EXACTLY what he's doing
How to move the magic he has to make a woman scream, lose her damn mind, cream...
If you were too big, I'd not know this deliciousness, delectability...
And, while I'll admit, the vision of me impaled on some large shaft, tightness stretched open might be esoterically appealing or the fodder of fantasy, I much prefer true pleasure to that particular pain.
Give me pain in other ways
Explore aspects of BDSM
But, please keep in mind
My cunt is tender, delicate even
I need a man who won't abuse my luscious flesh
Though he thrusts fast, deep, and ferociously
A bit of soreness
I'll accept
From vigorous play
All through the day
And night
Trust me on this:
When my pussy's all swollen
From your attentions
And right back in you push and stretch
I'm feeling you
I won't forget
You have implanted your indelible memory
You see
For men who tend to be
Small
Or even
Average
Let me be plain
For I want
No
Misconceptions
Nor
Missed perceptions
I'm talking penises here
I want you small or even average sized
Just big enough, you see, for truly sensitive play
Please, oh please, make my day
I'd like you in my mouth
Completely with ease
I'll have your balls as well
To tease
I'd like to take you all the way
Spend hours having you stay
Right in my mouth...
Yet,
I also enjoy you in my pussy, luv
Please glide right in
You feel just right
You move with ease
Touch all the right spots
Hit all my buttons
Ride me so... Mmm... (I'm getting wet, dripping honey, just thinking about you in me)
You make me clench you so tightly
Pussy muscles squeezing you relentlessly (can't help myself, you know?)
If you have finesse
I'm doubly blessed
For none can surpass
A small or average man who knows
EXACTLY what he's doing
How to move the magic he has to make a woman scream, lose her damn mind, cream...
If you were too big, I'd not know this deliciousness, delectability...
And, while I'll admit, the vision of me impaled on some large shaft, tightness stretched open might be esoterically appealing or the fodder of fantasy, I much prefer true pleasure to that particular pain.
Give me pain in other ways
Explore aspects of BDSM
But, please keep in mind
My cunt is tender, delicate even
I need a man who won't abuse my luscious flesh
Though he thrusts fast, deep, and ferociously
A bit of soreness
I'll accept
From vigorous play
All through the day
And night
Trust me on this:
When my pussy's all swollen
From your attentions
And right back in you push and stretch
I'm feeling you
I won't forget
You have implanted your indelible memory
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Re: An ode to certain penises
Anonymous
19th Sep 2014 8:42pm
Datz an ode awlryte a nyce won factoid savaja
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Rm
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 6:58am
Re: An ode to certain penises
Anonymous
19th Sep 2014 8:48pm
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 7:03am
Merci beaucoup, Gabriel, luv :-*!
I am glad you enjoyed both the poem and my voice, luv. ;-*
"Hmmm..."? See something intriguing? ;-p
I am glad you enjoyed both the poem and my voice, luv. ;-*
"Hmmm..."? See something intriguing? ;-p
Re: An ode to certain penises
19th Sep 2014 8:49pm
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20th Sep 2014 7:05am
Re: An ode to certain penises
Anonymous
19th Sep 2014 9:34pm
Savaja,
Finally someone who just plain gets it! Very well stated :-)
tornado
Finally someone who just plain gets it! Very well stated :-)
tornado
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 7:14am
Ahhh, tornado, luv :-* ~
Thank you very, very much!
I do get it, luv. I wish more people did. Our society is so ridiculous! Average means most, yes? Why not make most men realize they're fantastic?
Thank you very, very much!
I do get it, luv. I wish more people did. Our society is so ridiculous! Average means most, yes? Why not make most men realize they're fantastic?
Re: An ode to certain penises
19th Sep 2014 9:36pm
Amen hun....yet my yearnings r at the opposite side of the yard stick.....um....oops i mean ruler i know what its like to have a true preferrence
Awesome write
Awesome write
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 7:18am
Lilsouthernbelle, luv :-* ~
Hmmm...
Thank you very much, luv. :-*
You truly have a preference for the rarity, then.
Hmmm...
Thank you very much, luv. :-*
You truly have a preference for the rarity, then.
re: re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 6:48pm
The men i prefer r truly rare yes....
But for so many more reasons than just that lol
But for so many more reasons than just that lol
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Re: An ode to certain penises
Anonymous
19th Sep 2014 10:22pm
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 7:20am
Thank you very, very much, REKS24, luv. :-*!
And, now, I'll need a cold bath for envisioning you in a cold shower brought on by my poem, well... ;-*
And, now, I'll need a cold bath for envisioning you in a cold shower brought on by my poem, well... ;-*
Re: An ode to certain penises
19th Sep 2014 10:41pm
Intriguing. Has a certain Sapphic style, though plainly heterosexual in its uncommon subject admiration.
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 7:22am
Re: An ode to certain penises
19th Sep 2014 11:02pm
as they say, size matters. 1st time I've seen erotica aimed at that end of the spectrum. your explicit details certainly add to the incendiary value...
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 7:26am
Thank you very much, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*!
I suppose size does matter, though, you're right, I have probably broken some unwritten credo somewhere since my personal preference runs toward small and average sized cocks. Alas! ;-*
I am quite gratified, though, there's combustion occurring... ;-*
I suppose size does matter, though, you're right, I have probably broken some unwritten credo somewhere since my personal preference runs toward small and average sized cocks. Alas! ;-*
I am quite gratified, though, there's combustion occurring... ;-*
Re: An ode to certain penises
19th Sep 2014 11:06pm
Holy shitznitz!! lol
How generous n kind of you
to give cock love to all whom may otherwise
Not know' lol... Exceptional n naughty inking my dear! :)
How generous n kind of you
to give cock love to all whom may otherwise
Not know' lol... Exceptional n naughty inking my dear! :)
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 7:29am
Thank you very much, Erotic ninja, luv :-*!
Not so kind, I fear, nor so generous, rather selfish and self-centered; I'm celebrating what I like, you know. ;-p
Naughty, definitely that! ;-*
Not so kind, I fear, nor so generous, rather selfish and self-centered; I'm celebrating what I like, you know. ;-p
Naughty, definitely that! ;-*
Re: An ode to certain penises
I've got a steamer in my trunks :) This is quite a fantastical, tingle generating piece...makes one grow to their full hight and girth :) Wonderful, Savaja!
I just listened to your overwhelming sexy read...I like this passage and idea:
"vigorous play
All through the day
And night"
I just listened to your overwhelming sexy read...I like this passage and idea:
"vigorous play
All through the day
And night"
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 7:34am
Gahddess_Worship, luv :-* ~
Thank you very, very much! I am incredibly honored that you've had such a visceral reaction, luv, to my poem! ;-*
I'm pleased to have provided you with such delicious pleasure. ;-*
It is an excellent thing I was already headed to that cold bath for I'm definitely in need of it...
Thank you very, very much! I am incredibly honored that you've had such a visceral reaction, luv, to my poem! ;-*
I'm pleased to have provided you with such delicious pleasure. ;-*
It is an excellent thing I was already headed to that cold bath for I'm definitely in need of it...
re: re: Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 8:40am
Passion served chilled :) I can just hear the sizzle as your curves break the, very fortunate, bathwater's surface pulling you into it's wet embrace.
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Re: An ode to certain penises
20th Sep 2014 8:39pm
I like the truthfulness in this piece. It's refreshing. Men need to hear these nuggets of wisdom. It might make a difference in the bedroom.
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
Xmar82, luv :-* ~
Thank you so much! I am most grateful you found this refreshing and I DO hope it helps men to know there are women who appreciate them FOR those characteristics our society does not celebrate. I know I am not the only one either.
Thank you so much! I am most grateful you found this refreshing and I DO hope it helps men to know there are women who appreciate them FOR those characteristics our society does not celebrate. I know I am not the only one either.
Re: An ode to certain penises
21st Sep 2014 2:47pm
This is quite the turn on the usual writes here ... Interesting in it's stark unblinking honesty. Well done.
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
21st Sep 2014 4:23pm
Thank you very much, LobodeSanPedro, luv :-*!
It does sadden and exasperate me a bit that my poem is so unusual.
It does sadden and exasperate me a bit that my poem is so unusual.
Re: An ode to certain penises
22nd Sep 2014 5:45pm
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22nd Sep 2014 5:59pm
Re: An ode to certain penises
9th Feb 2015 6:30pm
re: Re: An ode to certain penises
5th Jun 2015 3:40pm
AlanNewbie, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very, very much for your lovely words. It heartens me to find my words speak to you in some way, luv. :-*
And, that you find somewhat in my voice as well I find enchanting... :-*
Thank you very, very much for your lovely words. It heartens me to find my words speak to you in some way, luv. :-*
And, that you find somewhat in my voice as well I find enchanting... :-*
Re: An ode to certain penises
Anonymous
10th Feb 2015 4:27am
Its nice to be appreciated! so cool
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
5th Jun 2015 4:10pm
Ahhh, slowgasm, luv ~ :-*
I am glad, indeed, you found somewhat in my words to hearten you, though, I must confess, luv, I really DO have this penchant of which I speak. :-*
Tis not so much altruism... ;-p
I am glad, indeed, you found somewhat in my words to hearten you, though, I must confess, luv, I really DO have this penchant of which I speak. :-*
Tis not so much altruism... ;-p
Re: An ode to certain penises
3rd Jun 2015 3:25pm
My eyes filled with passion as I read, and then eyes gave way to an ache on a different page..
This was so sensual and beautifully epic..
Yesssss
This was so sensual and beautifully epic..
Yesssss
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re: Re: An ode to certain penises
5th Jun 2015 4:27pm
Ahhh, vivid_mocha, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very, very, very much indeed. I am given cause to wonder if there is aught I might do to abrogate, alleviate, satiate this differing page's ache of yours. :-*
Please, luv, do let me know. I'll endeavor to do what I may... ;-*
Thank you very, very, very much indeed. I am given cause to wonder if there is aught I might do to abrogate, alleviate, satiate this differing page's ache of yours. :-*
Please, luv, do let me know. I'll endeavor to do what I may... ;-*
re: re: Re: An ode to certain penises
5th Jun 2015 5:51pm
.. I am literally clenching as I write,
You are first more than welcome.
I feel compelled to answer your question with a sigh..
And a muster of the a three letter word such as.... Yes, Yes... Yesss
You are first more than welcome.
I feel compelled to answer your question with a sigh..
And a muster of the a three letter word such as.... Yes, Yes... Yesss
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5th Jun 2015 7:24pm
Mmm...
Let me just...
I'll be a bit...
In the meantime, go see "In praise of women" for what I'm needing to do for that clenching, luv... ;-*
Let me just...
I'll be a bit...
In the meantime, go see "In praise of women" for what I'm needing to do for that clenching, luv... ;-*
Re. An ode to certain penises
9th Aug 2017 11:58pm
Savaja, just the sound of your sensual voice makes me come back to you. Your imagination helps me fly.
Best wishes, Alan.
Best wishes, Alan.
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