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'Die for Me...'
"I Die
each time
I cry..."
so why
won't you
Kill yourself...
You soul-
sucking sap
Bloody dark heart
Your soul is where
you should start...
So...
Die for me
Cry a sea...
A crimson spree
Lie for thee
In the pit of eternity...
Why? you say,
you see
Here now
is the end of we
Forever, and more,
be free...
So please,
darkened soul...
die for me.
*inspired by a lil song
I had playing in my head lol*
each time
I cry..."
so why
won't you
Kill yourself...
You soul-
sucking sap
Bloody dark heart
Your soul is where
you should start...
So...
Die for me
Cry a sea...
A crimson spree
Lie for thee
In the pit of eternity...
Why? you say,
you see
Here now
is the end of we
Forever, and more,
be free...
So please,
darkened soul...
die for me.
*inspired by a lil song
I had playing in my head lol*
Published 19th Sep 2014
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19th Sep 2014 3:53pm
I'm sure it will be a catchy tune. :) enjoyed the read, Poetik...and its stuck in my head now.
19th Sep 2014 3:58pm
Wow that was quick! U missed out on my artwork I was posting for the piece lol... Thanks sweetheart, always grateful
for your sweet support :)
for your sweet support :)
19th Sep 2014 4:15pm
Your artwork is a bit abstract...but it goes with the poem. Like being in the process of becoming.:) No worries its always a pleasure to read you, Poetik.
19th Sep 2014 4:34pm
Abstract for sure, but meant to represent
the heat if the soul in human form...
Also, I did it using a mouse in Microsoft paint
on my pc lol
the heat if the soul in human form...
Also, I did it using a mouse in Microsoft paint
on my pc lol
19th Sep 2014 7:41pm
19th Sep 2014 11:53pm
Thank u, I'm grateful for your thoughts n time :)
will return the favor ASAP :)
will return the favor ASAP :)
19th Sep 2014 11:27pm
19th Sep 2014 11:54pm
20th Sep 2014 1:06am
20th Sep 2014 2:46pm
Thank you my sweet lady, glad you liked n appreciate your continued support :)
20th Sep 2014 12:51pm
9th Nov 2014 3:30am
Thanks bro! I'm sorry I didn't respond sooner...
Didn't realize I missed ur comment
Didn't realize I missed ur comment
9th Nov 2014 3:17am
9th Nov 2014 3:31am
