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Re: Still ...
Anonymous
16th Sep 2014 10:46am
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16th Sep 2014 8:45pm
You have to be if you want to survive in a world of love and deceit. No tears anymore!
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16th Sep 2014 4:21pm
Chiyo, luv :-* ~
This poem has moved me so much I find it difficult to comment. What I can say is this: you have accurately conveyed the feelings I've been struggling with for the last while, hence the choked feeling in my throat as I read this haiku over and over.
Thank you, luv. :-* You have such a profound gift for concise clarity and precision!
This poem has moved me so much I find it difficult to comment. What I can say is this: you have accurately conveyed the feelings I've been struggling with for the last while, hence the choked feeling in my throat as I read this haiku over and over.
Thank you, luv. :-* You have such a profound gift for concise clarity and precision!
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16th Sep 2014 8:52pm
Savaja, dear! I'm not happy that this haiku added to your own sad feelings! I'm sorry about that! Hope you'll feel better soon *hugs*!
And thank you so much for your lovely words about this haiku ... I need and try to be concise since there are only 17 syllables available and I love to fill them with life :-). At least I try.
And thank you so much for your lovely words about this haiku ... I need and try to be concise since there are only 17 syllables available and I love to fill them with life :-). At least I try.
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17th Sep 2014 1:54am
Oh, Chiyo, luv ~
Thank you for your kind thoughts and words. I did not mean to give you the impression that your haiku added to me sadness for it did not; you expressed it so well, so fully and eloquently.
No need for you to apologize, luv. :-* You're stellar.
Thank you for your kind thoughts and words. I did not mean to give you the impression that your haiku added to me sadness for it did not; you expressed it so well, so fully and eloquently.
No need for you to apologize, luv. :-* You're stellar.
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17th Sep 2014 12:41pm
Your lovely comments comfort my heart, filling it with joy, dear Savaja :-). Thank you so much! Appreciate your thoughts so very much!
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16th Sep 2014 6:32pm
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16th Sep 2014 8:54pm
Hi sooterella! Thanks for stopping by and leaving your kind comment :-)! AND for cheering me up :-)!
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16th Sep 2014 6:59pm
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16th Sep 2014 8:57pm
I take what I can get
to get those haikus done :-).
Thanks, Paul, always glad
about your comments :-).
to get those haikus done :-).
Thanks, Paul, always glad
about your comments :-).
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17th Sep 2014 12:30pm
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16th Sep 2014 11:05pm
To all a little rain must fall but the sun will eventually come out. Life your spirits.
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17th Sep 2014 12:33pm
I know, xmar82, I know. The sun already peaks through the clouds. Just a little, but still ... :-)
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2014 8:38am
Some tears are shed in stillness
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17th Sep 2014 12:36pm
Mostly if you're really hurting you're kind of petrified. No tears at all in such moments ...
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17th Sep 2014 7:22pm
You know, Poe, that I only write such stuff because I want to be hugged and kissed :-)!!! Thanks, sweetheart!
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18th Sep 2014 9:16pm
You're so right, dear John, all the more since there's no possibility to go for a nice swim :-).
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19th Sep 2014 2:17am
Hugs* I'm glad you're doing ok :) you are a strong person :). Wonderful write as always enjoy your work :D
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Aw, Sara, you're such a lovely person. I'd like to thank you so much for your kind words and appreciate them a lot! xo
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30th Nov 2014 3:13pm
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30th Nov 2014 8:12pm
Thank you so much, Leaking Abattoir, for your kind comment! If you don't mind my asking, what do you mean exactly by 'Opheliac feeling' in this case? Thanks for enlightening me :-)!
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4th Dec 2014 7:34am
Opheliac is a writer here. She's good, particularly your style. She does not write much anymore but I think you'll enjoy her work.
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4th Dec 2014 6:21pm
Ah! Thought it was a special style in general :-). I'll look her up. Thanks for the tip!