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Institution - A Haiku
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Institution - A Haiku
White tiled ceiling
Emotionless faces stare
Broken inside out
Written by
Scenario
(MC)
Published
4th Sep 2014
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Re: Institution - A Haiku
Savaja
5th Sep 2014 10:16pm
Oh, Scenario, luv :-* ~
This small poem is so tremendously desolate conveying such pain and torment with so few words. Such a sterile atmosphere to contain and maintain such vivid overwhelming pain.
Exceedingly well done, luv. :-*
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re: Re: Institution - A Haiku
Scenario
(MC)
6th Sep 2014 1:25am
Thank you, thank you very much. I'm not one for haiku usually but I was really getting into this one.
Glad you enjoyed.
Cheers,
MC
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Re: Institution - A Haiku
B3autifulDarkn3ss
(Domi)
6th Sep 2014 7:05am
<3
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