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Changing the Bulb Again
Pally Ali's
curtains billow,
two mobiles
always on
A creaky board
on the stairway
groans twice
because none of his visitors
stay too long
Published 12th Apr 2011
| Edited 26th Mar 2016
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13th Apr 2011 4:26am
suggestive in nature. i definitely had to read this twice and think about it a while to really get a grasp about what this is. not a bad thing. distinctive style of writing for sure. i may have to read it once more before i click out.
13th Apr 2011 9:50am
As you're a yankee doodler you may want to switch 'mobiles' for 'cells'
Thanks for stopping by - brave name by the way.
Best ~ Abra
Thanks for stopping by - brave name by the way.
Best ~ Abra
31st Dec 2011 1:14am
Anonymous
20th Jan 2015 4:09am
good read I also had to read a few times to get but wonderfully done
