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my body

like a willow

who has just bud

watching the dew drops, urning for rain

Written by mavement

Published 11th Apr 2011

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nice

11th Apr 2011 5:41pm

kept it short and sweet. i like the plant theme

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11th Apr 2011 6:53pm

its a little to short

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