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The Dip
All alone with my thoughts
Overlooking the cool crisp water
Memories of you drift in
On the early morning breeze
Hidden away deep within
These thick and tall trees
I crept down the hill
To the the inviting pond
Playfully, I tested the water
Perfect temperature for relaxing
With undeniable comfort and ease
Stirring urges beyond belief
Standing up to disrobe
Looking around over my shoulders
Even tho I know I'm all alone
Clothes slowly falling to the ground
Feeling like a giddy child
Caught in the thrill of it
Devilish little smirk emerges
Spread across my lips
As I scamper into the water
Out of the corner of my eye
I catch a glimpse
Of your little princess
Kneeling down in awe
Staring deep within myself
I slowly reach down
Submerging my hand beneath
From this unique angle
For the very first time
I am able to see clearly
My well hidden treasures
Hovering over my replication
Instintinctively reaching down
Lost in the moment
Oh....the pleasure that I found
Drenched in wetness
Coating my hungered digits
Not just by
The water beneath my feet
Knees growing weak
Body in a shudder
Lowered myself all the way down
Into the welcoming water
Laying myself back comfortably
In the underlying sand
My burning loins
Beckoning me to travel on
Sensual nomadic caresses
Heed each and every command
Issued by you Sir
Through telepathetic speech
You are laying beside me
In these cool shallow waters
Causing a mighty flood to build
Overtaking my very soul
Despite the many miles
That separate our physical entities
I can feel when I
Flow into your head
Overlooking the cool crisp water
Memories of you drift in
On the early morning breeze
Hidden away deep within
These thick and tall trees
I crept down the hill
To the the inviting pond
Playfully, I tested the water
Perfect temperature for relaxing
With undeniable comfort and ease
Stirring urges beyond belief
Standing up to disrobe
Looking around over my shoulders
Even tho I know I'm all alone
Clothes slowly falling to the ground
Feeling like a giddy child
Caught in the thrill of it
Devilish little smirk emerges
Spread across my lips
As I scamper into the water
Out of the corner of my eye
I catch a glimpse
Of your little princess
Kneeling down in awe
Staring deep within myself
I slowly reach down
Submerging my hand beneath
From this unique angle
For the very first time
I am able to see clearly
My well hidden treasures
Hovering over my replication
Instintinctively reaching down
Lost in the moment
Oh....the pleasure that I found
Drenched in wetness
Coating my hungered digits
Not just by
The water beneath my feet
Knees growing weak
Body in a shudder
Lowered myself all the way down
Into the welcoming water
Laying myself back comfortably
In the underlying sand
My burning loins
Beckoning me to travel on
Sensual nomadic caresses
Heed each and every command
Issued by you Sir
Through telepathetic speech
You are laying beside me
In these cool shallow waters
Causing a mighty flood to build
Overtaking my very soul
Despite the many miles
That separate our physical entities
I can feel when I
Flow into your head
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Re: The Dip
26th Aug 2014 1:48pm
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26th Aug 2014 1:54pm
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2014 2:40pm
Great stuff Belle!
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2014 5:51pm
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26th Aug 2014 7:21pm
Peace....we all need more of that dont we sir. Im so thankful to u for that comment hun
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
re: Re: The Dip
28th Aug 2014 4:26pm
U always grace me with such glorious comments hun. Leaving me such big smiles each time. I cant thsnk u enough
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28th Aug 2014 4:33pm
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26th Aug 2014 7:23pm
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26th Aug 2014 11:31pm
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28th Aug 2014 4:32pm
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26th Aug 2014 11:53pm
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28th Aug 2014 8:19pm
Nothing like a refreshing dip n southern humidity hun.....if u know what i mean ;-)
Re: The Dip
27th Aug 2014 2:32am
Calm, cool, encompassing every emotion.
Masterful work displayed here, Ms Belle.
Masterful work displayed here, Ms Belle.
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28th Aug 2014 8:21pm
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28th Aug 2014 8:22pm
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27th Aug 2014 2:47am
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28th Aug 2014 8:24pm
Re: The Dip
27th Aug 2014 8:37pm
Echo Xmar 82. Favourite verses eight to ten, skilfully mingling two kinds of wetness.
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28th Aug 2014 8:25pm
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2014 5:38pm
Belle,
Seems there are many treasures yet to be salvaged from beneath the sea; perhaps this pearl you speak of is only the beginning ; ) Enjoyed the Dip.
tornado
Seems there are many treasures yet to be salvaged from beneath the sea; perhaps this pearl you speak of is only the beginning ; ) Enjoyed the Dip.
tornado
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28th Aug 2014 8:27pm
Re: The Dip
29th Aug 2014 2:32am
You have created fire
Under water my dear
This write invokes
A steamy atmosphere
Suddenly want to be water
To trace your every curve
Making me ripple
With every shake and quiver
Under water my dear
This write invokes
A steamy atmosphere
Suddenly want to be water
To trace your every curve
Making me ripple
With every shake and quiver
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