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Like a Flower
Like a flower,
in the beginning
all bare and empty
pushing and changing
striving to grow
bringing forth splendid colors
much beauty to show
my love for you
starts as a tiny seed
planted deep inside
let the blossoms burst
and fruit be borne
my love for you
like a flower
full of awe
full of beauty
water it daily.
in the beginning
all bare and empty
pushing and changing
striving to grow
bringing forth splendid colors
much beauty to show
my love for you
starts as a tiny seed
planted deep inside
let the blossoms burst
and fruit be borne
my love for you
like a flower
full of awe
full of beauty
water it daily.
Published 24th Aug 2014
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24th Aug 2014 4:30pm
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24th Aug 2014 4:50pm
A poem that grows bit by bit into full strength, watered by powerful words and fertilized by tender emotion. A beautiful piece, Hashman.
24th Aug 2014 4:59pm
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24th Aug 2014 5:01pm
To have such a love...heaven sent. Lucky is she who is loved as such. :)Good read Hashman.
24th Aug 2014 5:42pm
Anonymous
24th Aug 2014 5:40pm
Water daily a profound way to end this one..lovely
Peace :)
Peace :)
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2014 1:01am
This is so touching.....yes we must water the flowers each day.....other wise they wilt away. I so feel this in me. RL for me. Xo :)
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