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Fancy elegance.
Dancing with the breeze.
Widowed elder.
Weeping with the rain.
Cautious hopes.
Peering over the horizon.
Momentary lapse of reason.
Playing games in you head.
Truth that is gone.
Leaving you with cries.
Vicious doubts.
Biting at you dreams.
Fragile angel.
Picking you back up with peace.
Thankful girl.
Praising with the growing flowers.
Toxic regrets.
Pushed away by grace.
Constant reminders.
Speaking words of life.
Fading guilt.
Replaced by vivid forgiveness.
And your world is transformed.
For the better.
Dancing with the breeze.
Widowed elder.
Weeping with the rain.
Cautious hopes.
Peering over the horizon.
Momentary lapse of reason.
Playing games in you head.
Truth that is gone.
Leaving you with cries.
Vicious doubts.
Biting at you dreams.
Fragile angel.
Picking you back up with peace.
Thankful girl.
Praising with the growing flowers.
Toxic regrets.
Pushed away by grace.
Constant reminders.
Speaking words of life.
Fading guilt.
Replaced by vivid forgiveness.
And your world is transformed.
For the better.
Published 10th Apr 2011
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10th Apr 2011 7:39am
it may be because i'm trippin ballz but i read it and cried,thank you so much and i love you!
10th Apr 2011 8:29am
really well written piece of poetry .you are on fire.
i may not be right but i think Momentarily could be replaced by momentary. (conflict of tense)
a great read all in all
i may not be right but i think Momentarily could be replaced by momentary. (conflict of tense)
a great read all in all
10th Apr 2011 8:22pm
11th Apr 2011 10:09pm
This poem keeps you guessing what your next theory will be.. I enjoyed it.. Your really good
15th Apr 2011 10:39am
