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Rhapsody in the Dark
Sitting at the edge of my bed
Total satin nakedness
Your words filling my room
As if musical notes
A symphony within my head
Skillfully fingering each note
Melodically entrancing my soul
Without hesitation going from arpeggio to staccato
A craftsman at your chosen art
Lustful maestro of this waltz
That we have chosen to share
Abandoning all of our cares
Reading my body like a work of genius
Written by one of the greatest of composers
This, your truly original musical feat
Brings this loyal minion to beautiful tears
Once the drum beats begin their thunderous conclusion
This woman is left limp and over whelmed
By love you have caused
Her to make to herself
A standing ovation
So deserving of you Sir
Your humble slave
Once again applauds your mastery
Of ALL things that are me
Operaretic screams
Replace silece within the darkness
As I sing out your name
Abandoning any and all shame
Total satin nakedness
Your words filling my room
As if musical notes
A symphony within my head
Skillfully fingering each note
Melodically entrancing my soul
Without hesitation going from arpeggio to staccato
A craftsman at your chosen art
Lustful maestro of this waltz
That we have chosen to share
Abandoning all of our cares
Reading my body like a work of genius
Written by one of the greatest of composers
This, your truly original musical feat
Brings this loyal minion to beautiful tears
Once the drum beats begin their thunderous conclusion
This woman is left limp and over whelmed
By love you have caused
Her to make to herself
A standing ovation
So deserving of you Sir
Your humble slave
Once again applauds your mastery
Of ALL things that are me
Operaretic screams
Replace silece within the darkness
As I sing out your name
Abandoning any and all shame
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Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
Anonymous
19th Aug 2014 9:02pm
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re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
19th Aug 2014 9:21pm
Well thanx so much hun....glad u enjoyed my lil write
It was truly inspired
Hugs
Belle
It was truly inspired
Hugs
Belle
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
Anonymous
19th Aug 2014 9:33pm
Belle,
Bravo!!! This is so well written and you've played your part so well. A well deserved standing ovation ; )
tornado
Bravo!!! This is so well written and you've played your part so well. A well deserved standing ovation ; )
tornado
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re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
19th Aug 2014 10:03pm
Well thank you Mr Tornado for that rave review sir. Glad that you enjoyed it so
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
19th Aug 2014 10:05pm
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20th Aug 2014 3:22am
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 00:55am
A thing of beauty.....
Any woman would proud to spend even one evening with the song the two of you share
Any woman would proud to spend even one evening with the song the two of you share
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re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 3:24am
Broken sweety so nice to see u on DU again. So happy that u found pleasure n my lil write hun
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 3:07am
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20th Aug 2014 3:27am
Mr Feddeler thank you sir for gracing my lil write with a read. So happy that enjoyed it darlin'
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 3:52am
Are you giving any music lessons?
Sign me up oh btw a very horny melodic read...lucky guy
Sign me up oh btw a very horny melodic read...lucky guy
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re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 3:56am
Hmmmmm....u would have to ask him about that sir.
So glad u enjoyed my lil song
Hugs
Belle
So glad u enjoyed my lil song
Hugs
Belle
re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 4:38am
Your short and simple comment says so very much
Thank you so very much darlin'
Hugs
Belle
Thank you so very much darlin'
Hugs
Belle
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20th Aug 2014 2:31pm
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20th Aug 2014 7:27pm
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
Anonymous
20th Aug 2014 8:20am
I agree with poetspeak.... hot fire bell, good stuff!
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re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 11:48am
Hahaha.....like they say hun great minds do think a like.
Thank you for such a nice comment
Hugs
Belle
Thank you for such a nice comment
Hugs
Belle
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 8:51am
Mmmmmmm Miss Belle...making beautiful music together...simply sensational...Love the sound of this great orchestral composition...playing you like a fine tuned instrument...I like...please be safe and well...thanks and take care...Jimbo
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re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 11:55am
Jimbo darlin im glad my lil song was hit in ur eyes. Thanx for for giving me a read darlin
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
21st Aug 2014 10:28am
With the right Maestro......miracles happen
Thanks for such a melodic comment
Thanks for such a melodic comment
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20th Aug 2014 12:47pm
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20th Aug 2014 1:05pm
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 2:21pm
pale skin dripping
bleeding lust in the dark
as the tongue
stitches his cords deeply in
a marionette of tones
of rhythmic sins
until your cords burst
releasing
screaming his name
sensual melody in the dark, a reverberating tone delivered with a perfect pitch
bleeding lust in the dark
as the tongue
stitches his cords deeply in
a marionette of tones
of rhythmic sins
until your cords burst
releasing
screaming his name
sensual melody in the dark, a reverberating tone delivered with a perfect pitch
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re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
21st Aug 2014 6:49am
Mmmmm....AS your add on adds such s thrill. I might just have to relive last night.
Thank you for your stimulating comment
Xoxoxo
Belle
Thank you for your stimulating comment
Xoxoxo
Belle
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 2:51pm
Lilsouthernbelle, luv :-* ~
This poem is truly magnificent, exquisite, a tribute to the intense beauty of you in utter abandonment. Being able to completely relinquish oneself to the moment, relax into your lover enough to show all of oneself - well, that is a very profound and intimate thing and perhaps the very most fragile and delicate gift a woman can bestow upon her lover.
This man of yours is blessed, greatly so, indeed, for you have given him something so very precious that he must needs vaults more secure than Fort Knox to guard it, so valuable is that which he holds.
I have discovered that most often it is not the thieves from without who are the problem, it is those pesky others: inattention, life's mundanity, daily minutiae, etc. These can erode the magic people make together lest efforts are actively made otherwise.
Meh, enough. This poem - 'tis exquisite as are you, Belle! :-*
This poem is truly magnificent, exquisite, a tribute to the intense beauty of you in utter abandonment. Being able to completely relinquish oneself to the moment, relax into your lover enough to show all of oneself - well, that is a very profound and intimate thing and perhaps the very most fragile and delicate gift a woman can bestow upon her lover.
This man of yours is blessed, greatly so, indeed, for you have given him something so very precious that he must needs vaults more secure than Fort Knox to guard it, so valuable is that which he holds.
I have discovered that most often it is not the thieves from without who are the problem, it is those pesky others: inattention, life's mundanity, daily minutiae, etc. These can erode the magic people make together lest efforts are actively made otherwise.
Meh, enough. This poem - 'tis exquisite as are you, Belle! :-*
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21st Aug 2014 10:23am
Lady S....u r much too kind my dear. Ur eloquent statement touches my heart
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 3:24pm
A work of art, in and of itself , miss belle. The act; and the ink! Very well done.
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re: Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
21st Aug 2014 10:31am
We all have art within ourselves.....
We just have to play the right notes hun
Glad u liked it Hawk
We just have to play the right notes hun
Glad u liked it Hawk
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20th Aug 2014 4:25pm
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21st Aug 2014 10:36am
Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
20th Aug 2014 11:25pm
What beautiful music you play. A melodic harp of ecstasy crescendo. Great write Belle.
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Re: Rhapsody in the Dark
Anonymous
21st Aug 2014 3:55am
Breaking down your will
To move in for the kill....
To move in for the kill....
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