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O Captain! My Captain!
Feeding the buzz on stillness
get up on stages of living
look out further than the shadows
of their aristrocratic noses
Call me O captain! My captain!
I lead you yet not
read me within a master poet's
pain made immortal
His heart bled for others
as he stumbled on the deck
steering on stormy seas
deep within himself
Never getting his sea legs
loving his roles
clown and pauper
Lover, father or prisoner
his last role was for himself
an exit stage left
he has left the building
hear the dirge rumble
Exult O shores and Ring O bells
he has reached the furthest shore
he walks the home of his dreams
love painted that came alive.
(*last italic line sourced from Walt Whitman's poem of the same title*)
get up on stages of living
look out further than the shadows
of their aristrocratic noses
Call me O captain! My captain!
I lead you yet not
read me within a master poet's
pain made immortal
His heart bled for others
as he stumbled on the deck
steering on stormy seas
deep within himself
Never getting his sea legs
loving his roles
clown and pauper
Lover, father or prisoner
his last role was for himself
an exit stage left
he has left the building
hear the dirge rumble
Exult O shores and Ring O bells
he has reached the furthest shore
he walks the home of his dreams
love painted that came alive.
(*last italic line sourced from Walt Whitman's poem of the same title*)
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19th Aug 2014 3:05am
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19th Aug 2014 5:31pm
Thanks for sharing this beautiful tribute with us Grace. Robin Williams will surely be missed by millions of his fans!
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20th Aug 2014 1:01am
...and thank you for the thread that allows others to pay their tribute to this much beloved and admired actor.
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Anonymous
19th Aug 2014 11:26pm
Very moving, love the structure, was this written for a comp? If so, I can't find it!

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20th Aug 2014 00:59am
Thanks for reading Sw9618. No it was written for a thread In Memoriam by EngrVV.:)
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22nd Aug 2014 11:33am
I am a big fan of Whitman's poem by this title. A lovely write grace, and a great tribute robin.
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22nd Aug 2014 2:08pm
Thank you so much for dropping by and reading, TheAceOfSpade. I am glad you liked it. honoured..:)