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Alone
I am here
You are there
I wish we were both together
Do not allow the light to burn you
and return to me when you are free
You are there
I wish we were both together
Do not allow the light to burn you
and return to me when you are free
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Re: Alone
Anonymous
17th Aug 2014 4:00am
amazing depth in so few words, beautiful as always.
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17th Aug 2014 4:02am
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Re: Alone
Anonymous
31st Aug 2014 2:51am
Is this a long distance relationship?
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2nd Sep 2014 5:35am
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2014 3:21pm
I ask because long distance relationships can be tough, especially if you long to be in their arms.
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8th Oct 2014 3:22am
Re: Alone
29th Oct 2014 00:51am
Literally sat up out of bed when I read this. You have captured all of my feelings about my ex in so few yet p powerful words. Thank you for this
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29th Oct 2014 00:57am