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Rug Burn
Lazy, rainy Sunday afternoon
Cuddling on the couch
Stretched out together
Watching bad, old black and whites
That we cannot help but like
You start walking
Your fingers up my arm
We have played this game
Oh so many times before
It's tickle time!!!
Think you are being sneaky
You're definitely not
Haha...still get me anyway
Wiggling and non-stop laughing start
Till we both hit the floor
Afraid that you hurt me
Apologies and kisses followed
Your sweet side exposed
Sweet soon takes a passionate turn
You flip me on all fours
On your knees behind me
Taking in the view
Without warning....SLAP!!!
Causing me to squeal
Many more come my way
Each harder than before
As you mount me
I plead for one more
Grabbing my shoulders
Pulling me up to you
Just a slight arch in my back
Balls slapping feverishly
The pace increases
My knees are on fire
Caught in the moment
I don't care
Your nails brand my back
As you lose control
Vivid screams fill the room
As mutual climax soars
Cuddling on the couch
Stretched out together
Watching bad, old black and whites
That we cannot help but like
You start walking
Your fingers up my arm
We have played this game
Oh so many times before
It's tickle time!!!
Think you are being sneaky
You're definitely not
Haha...still get me anyway
Wiggling and non-stop laughing start
Till we both hit the floor
Afraid that you hurt me
Apologies and kisses followed
Your sweet side exposed
Sweet soon takes a passionate turn
You flip me on all fours
On your knees behind me
Taking in the view
Without warning....SLAP!!!
Causing me to squeal
Many more come my way
Each harder than before
As you mount me
I plead for one more
Grabbing my shoulders
Pulling me up to you
Just a slight arch in my back
Balls slapping feverishly
The pace increases
My knees are on fire
Caught in the moment
I don't care
Your nails brand my back
As you lose control
Vivid screams fill the room
As mutual climax soars
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Re: Rug Burn
14th Aug 2014 7:20pm
I'd take this kinda rainy Sunday afternoon.. anytime!! wonderfully done.. ink of two fun and sensual souls mutually living, laughn, and loving. kudos ma'm... with love and respect.xoxo domore
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re: Re: Rug Burn
14th Aug 2014 7:56pm
Wish that it could rain every Sunday myself....lol
Sweety im glad that u enjoyed it. Thanx for such a gracious comment.
Hugs
Belle
Sweety im glad that u enjoyed it. Thanx for such a gracious comment.
Hugs
Belle
Re: Rug Burn
14th Aug 2014 8:09pm
Sounds like a great way to spend a weekend not just Sunday. Sweet adult fun. Pleasing each other, growing closer and more in love. Great write Belle.
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re: Re: Rug Burn
14th Aug 2014 8:47pm
Nothing like enjoying fun playtime too. People tend to take things too seriously. Glad u enjoyed it dear friend
Re: Rug Burn
14th Aug 2014 8:14pm
two souls playing
passion fills their veins
walking on the edge
they fall victim
to the sensual rain
that instantly wets them
to penetrate one another
gripping and holding
feverishly welcoming
the down pour of the other
Sexy write, burns just where it needs
passion fills their veins
walking on the edge
they fall victim
to the sensual rain
that instantly wets them
to penetrate one another
gripping and holding
feverishly welcoming
the down pour of the other
Sexy write, burns just where it needs
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re: Re: Rug Burn
14th Aug 2014 8:49pm
AS hun...must say ur add on there is quite yummy. Glad to have sparked that
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: Rug Burn
14th Aug 2014 8:23pm
Great ink. This is really a quilty pleasure of mine. When I read i could not resist in reading it more and moew and surely made my underwear totally soaked
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re: Re: Rug Burn
14th Aug 2014 8:53pm
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Anonymous
14th Aug 2014 10:35pm
Great stuff, great story Belle!
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re: Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 2:05am
Re: Rug Burn
Anonymous
14th Aug 2014 10:50pm
Belle,
The perfect place for a slap, perfect visual and perfect place for a burn! What a day for a feverish tale ; ) Take care of those knees, now!
tornado
The perfect place for a slap, perfect visual and perfect place for a burn! What a day for a feverish tale ; ) Take care of those knees, now!
tornado
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re: Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 2:08am
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15th Aug 2014 00:55am
re: Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 2:10am
No sir....best way to spend a cloudy rainy day
Thanx for the read darlin
Hugs
Belle
Thanx for the read darlin
Hugs
Belle
Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 2:51am
Wow...such sexy read...desired felt all the way through to the "mutual climax soars"...
Slaaaap
Slaaaap
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re: Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 2:54am
Well when i desire some one they truly know. Glad u could tell how that moment could possibly feel
Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 4:18am
Ahhh, lilsouthernbelle, luv :-* ~
I love the unabashed nature of this, the wonderful, ebb and flow, playing and loving together inextricably intertwined throughout. You never stopped playing and loving, loving and playing - maybe the forms did. I feel horribly inadequate to what I'm attempting to articulate here, so I'll just say this:
Thank you for sharing, luv. The fundamental substance of your relationship is a marvelous thing to behold. :-*
I love the unabashed nature of this, the wonderful, ebb and flow, playing and loving together inextricably intertwined throughout. You never stopped playing and loving, loving and playing - maybe the forms did. I feel horribly inadequate to what I'm attempting to articulate here, so I'll just say this:
Thank you for sharing, luv. The fundamental substance of your relationship is a marvelous thing to behold. :-*
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re: Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 4:35am
You inadequate? I seriously doubt thats a problem that you have ever faced hun. Lol
Thank you for your gracious comment
Thank you for your gracious comment
re: re: Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 6:40am
Heh - oh yes, me inadequate, with some degree of frequency. :-p
But, I have been told willingness to learn and a certain enthusiasm for instruction go a looooong way... ;-D
But, I have been told willingness to learn and a certain enthusiasm for instruction go a looooong way... ;-D
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15th Aug 2014 7:39am
Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 7:12am
ooooh Miss Belle...sounds like you'd enjoy more "Lazy, rainy Sunday afternoons" because I don't think there would be much opposition to reading about more of them!!! Please be safe and well...thanks and take care...Jimbo
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re: Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 7:48am
Ill b sure to let u know when the next storm blows thru hun
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 8:28am
Nicely penned, Ms Belle.
A really good time shared herein.
Rainy day, sunny day, cloudy day,
is there ever an inappropriate day?
Rhetorical question. :)
A really good time shared herein.
Rainy day, sunny day, cloudy day,
is there ever an inappropriate day?
Rhetorical question. :)
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re: Re: Rug Burn
15th Aug 2014 2:21pm
Thank you Mr Vegas for such a kind comment. So happy that u enjoyed my lil write hun
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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20th Aug 2014 7:01pm
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re: Re: Rug Burn
21st Aug 2014 8:18am
If they r opposed hun its their loss....
Thanx for the amazing comment
Thanx for the amazing comment