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Hot Water
Engulfed in steam
One leg hanging off the side
Spread good and wide
My pink for you to see
Two fingers gliding
On slick warm walls
Wiggling on the spot
That brings about dreams
Water joining this lil dance
Each splash replacing
Your hungered tongue
Tasting every inch
Every lil droplet
Is your starving fingers
As they eagerly explore
My hidden gems
Reaching for the shower head
Wishing for yours instead
The boiling point cums
Its your name I SCREAM
One leg hanging off the side
Spread good and wide
My pink for you to see
Two fingers gliding
On slick warm walls
Wiggling on the spot
That brings about dreams
Water joining this lil dance
Each splash replacing
Your hungered tongue
Tasting every inch
Every lil droplet
Is your starving fingers
As they eagerly explore
My hidden gems
Reaching for the shower head
Wishing for yours instead
The boiling point cums
Its your name I SCREAM
Published 14th Aug 2014
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14th Aug 2014 8:07pm
Oooh Llaaannccee!! LOL!! Just kidding!
Hot write Ms. Bellle!!
You make bath time fun sweets!!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
Hot write Ms. Bellle!!
You make bath time fun sweets!!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
14th Aug 2014 9:00pm
14th Aug 2014 8:10pm
14th Aug 2014 9:01pm
14th Aug 2014 8:11pm
14th Aug 2014 9:03pm
Nothing like a good soak....
Glad u liked my lil write darlin
Hugs
Belle
Glad u liked my lil write darlin
Hugs
Belle
14th Aug 2014 8:19pm
Love the imagery you have displayed
What pleasure you must desire
to give such glory to a simple bath
screaming and squirting
in a pool of fire
Hot indeed
What pleasure you must desire
to give such glory to a simple bath
screaming and squirting
in a pool of fire
Hot indeed
14th Aug 2014 9:06pm
There is nothing EVER simple about me n the tub AS.
EVERYDAY is a new trip to my lil playground
Xoxoxo
Belle
EVERYDAY is a new trip to my lil playground
Xoxoxo
Belle
14th Aug 2014 10:01pm
15th Aug 2014 2:13am
Mr Hawk....so glad u can. With the way u spend ur time having clear vision is a must hun
Xoxoxo
Belle
Xoxoxo
Belle
Anonymous
14th Aug 2014 10:33pm
Good stuff Belle!
15th Aug 2014 2:15am
Anonymous
14th Aug 2014 10:55pm
Belle,
What a scalding write! You had me from the first 3 lines! Some good clean fun, I tell you what! ; )
tornado
What a scalding write! You had me from the first 3 lines! Some good clean fun, I tell you what! ; )
tornado
15th Aug 2014 2:16am
15th Aug 2014 2:45am
15th Aug 2014 2:51am
Well sir....steam rises i guess we just know how far it can travel til we r informed.
Glad u enjoyed it hun
Glad u enjoyed it hun
18th Aug 2014 7:08am
18th Aug 2014 8:31am
Oh.....yes sir. Nothing like a good "hot" soak.
Thanx so much for giving me a read hun.
Hugs
Belle
Thanx so much for giving me a read hun.
Hugs
Belle
Anonymous
20th Aug 2014 7:15pm
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21st Aug 2014 4:32am
Glad you enjoyed it hun....
Thank you for your suggestions darlin
Hugs
Belle
Thank you for your suggestions darlin
Hugs
Belle
21st Aug 2014 2:09am
21st Aug 2014 4:44am
I take it Mr Viper that you enjoyed my lil write...
Thank you darlin for giving me a read
Hugs
Belle
Thank you darlin for giving me a read
Hugs
Belle
22nd Aug 2014 10:29pm
23rd Aug 2014 4:28am
Well sir DO NOT assume things that u do not know anything about. U DO NOT know me
