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Glutonous Me
The more I get
The more I want of YOU
Does that make me a gluton?
Lord, help me
You are so good at what you do
You leave me wanting for nothing
Long, deep and passionate kisses
On my strawberry lips
And the honey dipped ones below
Strong hands and fingers read me
As if I was penned by the great bard
Thumbing through my pages nice and slow
Nibbles and bites on my shoulders
Drive me to my edge
My body begging for your rod
I know it's oh so wrong
During our intimate interludes
You become my personal GOD
The more I want of YOU
Does that make me a gluton?
Lord, help me
You are so good at what you do
You leave me wanting for nothing
Long, deep and passionate kisses
On my strawberry lips
And the honey dipped ones below
Strong hands and fingers read me
As if I was penned by the great bard
Thumbing through my pages nice and slow
Nibbles and bites on my shoulders
Drive me to my edge
My body begging for your rod
I know it's oh so wrong
During our intimate interludes
You become my personal GOD
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Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 5:54pm
re: Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 6:04pm
Powerful feelings inspired that line. Im glad my point came across just as i wanted it to.
Glad you enjoyed it
Belle
Glad you enjoyed it
Belle
Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 6:50pm
This is a really good poem Belle. Heart felt and deep. We can never have to much love. Great write.
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re: Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 7:01pm
Dear X im so glad you liked this one. It was truly inspired
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 7:18pm
"I know it's oh so wrong
During our intimate interludes
You become my personal GOD"
That line alone says it all, beautiful lines leading to it....but the last one gets it done.
Thank you for sharing
During our intimate interludes
You become my personal GOD"
That line alone says it all, beautiful lines leading to it....but the last one gets it done.
Thank you for sharing
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re: Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 7:41pm
Awakened darlin' so glad those lines struck a chord. They were truly inspired in so many ways
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 7:47pm
mmmm mmm mighty fine write.. sensual and sexy.. truly enjoyed this read.. you ink love well :) with much respect..domore
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re: Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 8:00pm
Hun im humbled by ur comment my writes nothing when compared to urs
Ty so very muh for ur kindnes
Hugs
Belle
Ty so very muh for ur kindnes
Hugs
Belle
Re: Glutonous Me
Anonymous
13th Aug 2014 8:02pm
Good one bell, great lines

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re: Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 8:08pm
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13th Aug 2014 9:32pm
My inspiration hopefully is truly shining thru with this one
Thanx hun
Thanx hun
Re: Glutonous Me
Anonymous
13th Aug 2014 9:47pm
Belle,
Your 2nd stanza sums up your write for me:
" Lord, help me
You are so good at what you do
You leave me wanting for nothing"
Well, that and the honey dipped line : )
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Your 2nd stanza sums up your write for me:
" Lord, help me
You are so good at what you do
You leave me wanting for nothing"
Well, that and the honey dipped line : )
Enjoyed!!!
tornado

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re: Re: Glutonous Me
13th Aug 2014 9:53pm
Re: Glutonous Me
14th Aug 2014 3:57am
My Pretty Belle, Awesome write sweets!!
Love this piece!!
Great read!!
If It's good than it's good!!
Sir Lancelott
Love this piece!!
Great read!!
If It's good than it's good!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Glutonous Me
14th Aug 2014 6:02am
Re: Glutonous Me
14th Aug 2014 2:14pm
re: Re: Glutonous Me
14th Aug 2014 3:19pm
Well yes sir it is....
Atleast unlike most others im confessing my sins. Hope u liked my lil confession hun
Hugs
Belle
Atleast unlike most others im confessing my sins. Hope u liked my lil confession hun
Hugs
Belle
Re: Glutonous Me
15th Aug 2014 1:11am
Confession is good for the spirit and soul.
You penned it very well, Ms Belle. :)
And, the photo doesn't detract. :D
You penned it very well, Ms Belle. :)
And, the photo doesn't detract. :D
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re: Re: Glutonous Me
15th Aug 2014 2:01am
We all need to purge our inner most thoughts from time time. Especially when letting somebody know how we truly feel
Makes we smile that u liked it all...including the pic
Xoxoxo
Belle
Makes we smile that u liked it all...including the pic
Xoxoxo
Belle
Re: Glutonous Me
18th Aug 2014 7:31pm
re: Re: Glutonous Me
18th Aug 2014 8:29pm
Thank you so much darlin....
Honored that it caught ur attention
Thanks for giving me a read hun
Hugs
Belle
Honored that it caught ur attention
Thanks for giving me a read hun
Hugs
Belle
Re: Glutonous Me
Anonymous
20th Aug 2014 6:42pm
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re: Re: Glutonous Me
21st Aug 2014 6:53am
Without life experience a poetz words r empty n it sbows.
Thank u for ur amazing comment hun
Hugs
Belle
Thank u for ur amazing comment hun
Hugs
Belle