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Black Roses and a Bleeding Heart
Whirlwind romance
Met completely by chance
He filled her head
With pretty little lies
She gifted him
With love everlasting
Offered to have the child
He proclaimed to desperately want
His circumstances changed
Hit a small bump
In the road he normally traveled
He blocked her out
Chewed up and spit
Her gifts in her face
Her pain of no consequence
Only in tune with his
He left her with two gifts
Wrapped up with a bow
A dozen thorny black roses
And a broken bleeding heart
Met completely by chance
He filled her head
With pretty little lies
She gifted him
With love everlasting
Offered to have the child
He proclaimed to desperately want
His circumstances changed
Hit a small bump
In the road he normally traveled
He blocked her out
Chewed up and spit
Her gifts in her face
Her pain of no consequence
Only in tune with his
He left her with two gifts
Wrapped up with a bow
A dozen thorny black roses
And a broken bleeding heart
Published 13th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2014 5:25am
Ouch!!! Feel those sharp thorns stabbing your heart. Heartbreaking write deeply felt in my own. Sending luv and hugs your way. Xo :)
13th Aug 2014 7:14am
Anonymous
13th Aug 2014 5:55am
Must have been a heartbreaker.
13th Aug 2014 12:06pm
13th Aug 2014 6:59am
Sounds similar to what I went through in real life years ago, more than once.
13th Aug 2014 12:08pm
Then hun we have this n common. Hope ur heart healed without too many scars
13th Aug 2014 7:01am
These type of men aren't worth your trouble...they're too self absorbed in their own troubles...
Well penned...Awesome read
Well penned...Awesome read
13th Aug 2014 12:10pm
Anonymous
13th Aug 2014 2:35pm
belle,
Bows were meant to come untied. Nice write!
tornado
Bows were meant to come untied. Nice write!
tornado
13th Aug 2014 2:56pm
13th Aug 2014 2:44pm
sadly ...this is very relatable ink.. not just for me.. but more than likely many who read this.. wonderfully penned.. enjoyed the read.. with love and respect..domore
13th Aug 2014 2:58pm
Thank you domore for wonderful comment
Only wish you relating to happier subject matter
Hugs
Belle
Only wish you relating to happier subject matter
Hugs
Belle
13th Aug 2014 6:54pm
It hurts terribly when the truth is uncovered. I am sorry for your pain Belle, I just hope that you have found new love. Good Ink.
13th Aug 2014 7:05pm
Worry not for me dear X. I am truly on the mend. Writing this release the remainder of the pain
15th Aug 2014 1:06am
Harsh reality, disappointment, pain.
Without these, Ms Belle, joy would be undefined.
Honest, excellent ink.
Without these, Ms Belle, joy would be undefined.
Honest, excellent ink.
15th Aug 2014 1:57am
So very true Mr Vegas. Without pain we wouldnt treasure lifes lil treasure.
Glad u enjoyed it darlin
Hugs
Belle
Glad u enjoyed it darlin
Hugs
Belle
Anonymous
20th Aug 2014 6:30pm
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21st Aug 2014 7:04am
Without heartbreak we cannot truly appreciate true affection once we find it
Glad u enjoyed this hun
Glad u enjoyed this hun
26th Nov 2014 4:50pm
"He left her with two gifts
Wrapped up with a bow
A dozen thorny black roses
And a broken bleeding heart" -Powerful
"Her pain of no consequence" -Well placed
Great write, sad as hell, but great write!
Wrapped up with a bow
A dozen thorny black roses
And a broken bleeding heart" -Powerful
"Her pain of no consequence" -Well placed
Great write, sad as hell, but great write!
26th Nov 2014 5:05pm
Thanx so much AH
It was painful to write
But once i did the pain began to disipate
It was painful to write
But once i did the pain began to disipate
