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More Than Words
The way it feels
When he brushes
A stray hair from your face
No words needed
When he opens his arms
And you are in his embrace
Those times he looks
Deep in your eyes
And you know your his saving grace
Take them all in
Show your appreciation
Before they're gone without a trace
When he brushes
A stray hair from your face
No words needed
When he opens his arms
And you are in his embrace
Those times he looks
Deep in your eyes
And you know your his saving grace
Take them all in
Show your appreciation
Before they're gone without a trace
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Re: More Than Words
12th Aug 2014 6:11am
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12th Aug 2014 3:59pm
Ty darlin'...got lost n my head. The past n my current situations slapping me n the face
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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12th Aug 2014 6:14am
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12th Aug 2014 7:21pm
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2014 6:18am
great work belle
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12th Aug 2014 7:22pm
Re: More Than Words
12th Aug 2014 7:55am
Yes... Never take moments for granted.. Enjoy them and appreciate them while you can.
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12th Aug 2014 7:25pm
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12th Aug 2014 8:54am
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12th Aug 2014 7:33pm
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12th Aug 2014 10:11am
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12th Aug 2014 7:34pm
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12th Aug 2014 11:14am
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12th Aug 2014 7:39pm
People just dont pay enough attention to the little things that really matter.....
Thanks for giving it a read
Thanks for giving it a read
Re: More Than Words
12th Aug 2014 1:17pm
capture the moments indeed
you may have to go back to them someday in memory
until that day LIVE with it
be alive with the moment
because moments are great
excellent write
you may have to go back to them someday in memory
until that day LIVE with it
be alive with the moment
because moments are great
excellent write
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re: Re: More Than Words
12th Aug 2014 7:42pm
All very true words AS....ur a wise man hun
A memory of how something once was
Inspired me to jot this one down
A memory of how something once was
Inspired me to jot this one down
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12th Aug 2014 1:18pm
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12th Aug 2014 8:24pm
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12th Aug 2014 8:37pm
All too often we take the small gestures for granted
Then poof they r gone
Then poof they r gone
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12th Aug 2014 9:36pm
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Anonymous
12th Aug 2014 11:25pm
Beautiful is all I can say.....stunning write xo :)
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13th Aug 2014 11:58am
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13th Aug 2014 2:02am
what happened? the romance was going so well, then Boom! you slap us back to reality.
you have the subtlety of Dorothy Parker...
you have the subtlety of Dorothy Parker...
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13th Aug 2014 12:02pm
Mr Feddeler im taking that as the grandest of compliments. I only hope it was meant as such. There were many who just didnt know how to take a woman like her
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
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13th Aug 2014 10:08pm
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14th Aug 2014 2:53am
Always one of my favorites. A woman way ahead of her time. This one comment of yours has meant more than almost all of the others combined
Re: More Than Words
27th Aug 2014 2:36am
Belle......Where have you been all my life?The imagery that you create is amazing.
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27th Aug 2014 9:55pm
Ive been hiding n Bama sir lol
U r being way too kind to me POP
Hugs
Belle
U r being way too kind to me POP
Hugs
Belle
Re: More Than Words
27th Aug 2014 8:59pm
Heart-warming piece. No words needed in the presence of such a man. BTW your pose in your profile pic might tempt a gentleman to act as in verse one:
The way it feels
When he brushes
A stray hair from your face
From your pic, you have plenty to occupy a man in that way.
The way it feels
When he brushes
A stray hair from your face
From your pic, you have plenty to occupy a man in that way.
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28th Aug 2014 4:17pm
Wow.....quite the comment ty hun. Glad u enjoyed the total experience darlin
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle