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3:48.
3:48am
and I need 10 shots of Hennessy, I'll forget your name and probably mine too
make me numb times two.
Don't come for me if you don't plan on staying, my heart isn't open for you to enter whenever you feel like going on vacation.
Do you love me for my soul or do you love the way my hips curve and wrap around yours so perfectly..
When you left I went insane trying to find someone who can kiss me the way that you do
My heart is weak and you know that, you walked away with the little trust I had left and I don't know what you're doing with it.
It's 3:55 now and I've been drinking so much that my tears are starting to taste like liquor and heartbreak.
My memories of you consume me, you left and kept me with all your baggage.
I don't know what to say anymore so I'll stop right here...
and I need 10 shots of Hennessy, I'll forget your name and probably mine too
make me numb times two.
Don't come for me if you don't plan on staying, my heart isn't open for you to enter whenever you feel like going on vacation.
Do you love me for my soul or do you love the way my hips curve and wrap around yours so perfectly..
When you left I went insane trying to find someone who can kiss me the way that you do
My heart is weak and you know that, you walked away with the little trust I had left and I don't know what you're doing with it.
It's 3:55 now and I've been drinking so much that my tears are starting to taste like liquor and heartbreak.
My memories of you consume me, you left and kept me with all your baggage.
I don't know what to say anymore so I'll stop right here...
Published 11th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2014 11:12am
"Don't come for me if you don't plan on staying, my heart isn't open for you to enter whenever you feel like going on vacation."
Awesome line, great work.
Can relate to this. It gets better... heartbreak in hindsight is always a blessing in disguise from my experience. Hang in there!
Awesome line, great work.
Can relate to this. It gets better... heartbreak in hindsight is always a blessing in disguise from my experience. Hang in there!
11th Aug 2014 2:34pm
Don't come for me if you don't plan on staying, my heart isn't open for you to enter whenever you feel like going on vacation....Great line,can i put that on my door for the day he think of coming back?
Great read!Deep and heartfelt!Take heart and write it out or scream it out till you can't feel no-more!
Great read!Deep and heartfelt!Take heart and write it out or scream it out till you can't feel no-more!
11th Aug 2014 9:30pm
heartbreak poetry, it takes a few shots to get it down. it pours forth in those early hours, w/o a sun, w/o a moon...
13th Sep 2014 8:58am
Liquor salted with tears ... I've tasted it - swallowing it now - cool ink.
