Want

Wow oh my goodness, intense graphic and HOT HOT HOT!!! Loved it Savaja

Thank you very much, moonlightdreams, luv :-*.

I am glad you found this so much to your liking, luv! :-*

I absolutely love this piece! The imagery is so visceral, so real life. I'm turgid and tingly at the same time...I can even smell your work :)

Thank you very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*!

I am glad you had such a vivid reaction, luv, and enjoyed it so well! :-*

"Pull apart the dripping
Petals
Of my
Want"

- great lines, also enjoyed the subtle rhyme schemes in here, thighs, eyes, shaking, slaking

Thank you so much, SugarSkull, luv :-*! You always find the rhyme scheme when I write: a thing of which I am woefully unaware, luv. :-p I feel compelled to confess my flaws here. Again, I am sheepish.

Mmmmmm.....delicious Savaja.....
I'm going to be lazy here and say ditto with JT's comment...
:)

Thank you, GeniusGirl, luv :-*!

Good. Lord. I must confess a second time of ignorance of rhyme scheme. :-p

The sheepishness will not abate...

 Some pretty fine use of words.  Loved the passionately voiced vocals.  Great job!xoxoxo

Thank you, blackhyde, luv :-*!

I am glad you enjoyed the reading as that took some doing... ;-)

Thank you, again, luv.

skillful lovers here, giving & receiving intensely...

Thank you, JohnFeddeler, luv :-*!

Intensity was definitely the hallmark of this piece. Thank you for seeing and acknowledging it, luv. :-*

pink poem

Thank you, taito-10, luv :-*!

Hot!!!! Enjoyed and made me wet!

Thank you, romanticguy, luv :-*!

I am glad you enjoyed and that it made you wet - such tribute, luv! ;-)

I like this a lot, Savaja.

Smartly crafted as always, and provokes passionate images.

Well done!

Thank you very much, VegasPoet, luv :-*!

Always, I am glad to provoke passionate images in you, luv! :-*

Hhhhhmmmm...horny much? lol
jk... Seriously hot, smoking stroking
spillage that wets the appetite for more! lol

Thank you, Erotic Ninja, luv :-*!

I might, indeed, be aroused much, luv. ;-) I am glad you found this as scorching as you did, luv, and that your appetite is ready for more... :-p

you and me

Thank you, Hashman luv :-* for such a uniquely personal tribute. You are very sweet, luv.

Thank you very much, Gabriel, luv :-*!

I have to confess: your whole name makes me fair faint, luv. ;-* All that lovely French... (Every time I see it, I say it, you know. The whole thing. ;-p)

I am pleased you enjoyed my vocalization at the end of this poem, luv. :-*

Wow! You've really inserted yourself into this reading... you're definitely on the cusp of something here, perhaps inventing a new style of spoken word... method acting for poets.





Hot! :)

Thank you very much, Alexander Case, luv. :-*

Yes, this reading was quite an intense experience. I really felt as though I were on the verge of something rather profound, even earth-shattering. I would say this reading really helped me define some stylistic preferences. ;-*

Hmmm...method acting for poets, luv? Fascinating concept. I wonder what that might look like? :-*