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shadows
a flame flickers
one tear drops
sparks die
no more fires
a cold wind blowing
virgin snow falls
a twig snaps
trampled underfoot
run from what you can
hide from everything else
a dangerous mind
the frontman sings
i know the truth
up ahead
a way out
but i've lost the key
one tear drops
sparks die
no more fires
a cold wind blowing
virgin snow falls
a twig snaps
trampled underfoot
run from what you can
hide from everything else
a dangerous mind
the frontman sings
i know the truth
up ahead
a way out
but i've lost the key
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3rd Aug 2014 6:25pm
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2014 7:36pm
This hits me like a storm blowing thru my soul. I connect to this far more than I wish too. Great write. Thanks for sharing. RL for me! Xo :)
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3rd Aug 2014 7:48pm
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3rd Aug 2014 8:31pm
This is starkly beautiful, Hashman, luv :-*.
More than that, though, it shudders through the long corridors of the soul...
Such emotive depth you plumb, luv :-*!
Superb.
More than that, though, it shudders through the long corridors of the soul...
Such emotive depth you plumb, luv :-*!
Superb.
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3rd Aug 2014 9:03pm
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4th Aug 2014 00:54am
So few words to describe a starkness that goes so deep. Imagery evoked made me shiver. Good read,Hashman.
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4th Aug 2014 10:55pm
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Anonymous
9th Aug 2014 9:43pm
I felt a beautiful ache, melancholic but sweet
lovely write, hashman
peace :)
lovely write, hashman
peace :)
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10th Aug 2014 1:22am
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Anonymous
11th Aug 2014 10:56am
conjured up a lot of images and emotions, great write hashman
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