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The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
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Just look at you...
Pristine hair
Physically
well proportioned
wonderfully wearing that,
'woman meat...'
Curves, in the right places
Lean...in the areas
where all women
want to be
Loving her man
with a fierce passion,
feeding him with
motherly bosom
in the most intimate sense
Espousing wisdom
like God himself
would gift unto her
man
Pouring with ecstasy
a monsoon of orgasmic
declarations of a satisfied
'well kept' garden-his
ONLY to feast upon
Eyes, like diamonds
so full of light and life
rocking that billion dollar smile
Some may want
that super thin
'bone n' skin'
But I'll take me
a New Age Barbie
now that's what
I would consider
a REAL DOLL...
Just look at you...
Pristine hair
Physically
well proportioned
wonderfully wearing that,
'woman meat...'
Curves, in the right places
Lean...in the areas
where all women
want to be
Loving her man
with a fierce passion,
feeding him with
motherly bosom
in the most intimate sense
Espousing wisdom
like God himself
would gift unto her
man
Pouring with ecstasy
a monsoon of orgasmic
declarations of a satisfied
'well kept' garden-his
ONLY to feast upon
Eyes, like diamonds
so full of light and life
rocking that billion dollar smile
Some may want
that super thin
'bone n' skin'
But I'll take me
a New Age Barbie
now that's what
I would consider
a REAL DOLL...
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Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
1st Aug 2014 6:14pm
DAMN IT me too!!
Great write Bro. PK!!
Fantastic read Man!!
Gotta get one of those!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write Bro. PK!!
Fantastic read Man!!
Gotta get one of those!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
1st Aug 2014 6:17pm
Yea n if u find one, plz ask her if she's got a twin just like her for me! lol... Thanks a ton bro. Truly appreciate you :)
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
1st Aug 2014 6:19pm
re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
1st Aug 2014 6:23pm
Wow, I thought you'd never stop commenting
I mean u just went on n on... Lmao jk...
Thank u sweetie, appreciate it much :)
I mean u just went on n on... Lmao jk...
Thank u sweetie, appreciate it much :)
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Aug 2014 7:42pm
1st Aug 2014 7:39pm
great read, especially love
Espousing wisdom
like God himself
would gift unto her
man
shine on! nice work
also--in stanza 6..the tense changes to loving "her" man, which is different from the preceding..I'd edit that..up to you :)
Espousing wisdom
like God himself
would gift unto her
man
shine on! nice work
also--in stanza 6..the tense changes to loving "her" man, which is different from the preceding..I'd edit that..up to you :)
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re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
1st Aug 2014 11:23pm
Thanks sweetheart I'm grateful for the support
n the advice I hadn't realized I did that lol
Appreciate u much :)
n the advice I hadn't realized I did that lol
Appreciate u much :)
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
1st Aug 2014 11:19pm
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1st Aug 2014 11:25pm
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
2nd Aug 2014 00:28am
You gotta be a new age Ken too...good read Poetik :) it reminds me of The Stepford Wives...the movie.
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re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
2nd Aug 2014 10:23pm
New Age Ken huh? lol thank u sweetheart
I'm blushing :) truly grateful for all the support :)
I'm blushing :) truly grateful for all the support :)
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
2nd Aug 2014 00:57am
re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
2nd Aug 2014 10:24pm
Damn Mami I wish you were right! lol
Nah just my imagination working ot like usual
but truly I'm flattered n always grateful for ur visits to my page :)
Nah just my imagination working ot like usual
but truly I'm flattered n always grateful for ur visits to my page :)
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
2nd Aug 2014 7:45pm
re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
2nd Aug 2014 10:25pm
Yup, gotta love em for real bro! lol
Thanks so much for your time n support :)
Thanks so much for your time n support :)
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
3rd Aug 2014 2:22am
This was fabulous poetik...you breathed new life into barbie making her real..instead of fake plastic..digging this ink..well done sir :)
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re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
3rd Aug 2014 11:31am
Thank you my poetic sweetie, I'm pleased you liked
this n yea I'm just saying I'd much rather have
a woman with real substance n a well put together body
Not some near skeleton with fake everything lol
appreciate you always! :)
this n yea I'm just saying I'd much rather have
a woman with real substance n a well put together body
Not some near skeleton with fake everything lol
appreciate you always! :)
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd May 2016 10:59pm
5th Aug 2014 5:05am
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re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
6th Aug 2014 4:48am
N I EAT even better babe! lol ;)
Thank you sooooooo much, I'm flattered n truly
honored for your support :)
Thank you sooooooo much, I'm flattered n truly
honored for your support :)
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
11th Aug 2014 9:09pm
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11th Aug 2014 11:45pm
Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
14th Aug 2014 11:20pm
Long live woman curves! Barbie's finally soft and fiery not cold plastic. :) Thanks for this, PM, great write.
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re: Re: The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
14th Aug 2014 11:25pm
Re. The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
13th Jan 2017 4:09am
It was really good however I found it weird that you used the words woman meat lol
But anyways I love the admiration for curves in this,
This kind of reminds me of my " The Gift Of A Scorpio" poem :)
But anyways I love the admiration for curves in this,
This kind of reminds me of my " The Gift Of A Scorpio" poem :)
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Re: Re. The New Age Barbie...you 'Doll
13th Jan 2017 8:46am
Weird huh? lol well the term is normally used with Man in front of it, I just wanted to put something different from the norm. lol
Anywho I thank you my friend, it's pretty great hearing g your thoughts on my ink...greatly appreciate that :)
Anywho I thank you my friend, it's pretty great hearing g your thoughts on my ink...greatly appreciate that :)