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Photograph taken by LSP July 28, 2014
I experimented with two haiku to capture this moment
arched talons encase flesh
outlines the summer eve's dew
ants follow the trail
captured
wings cast shadows over the fallen
time sips the marrow
I experimented with two haiku to capture this moment
arched talons encase flesh
outlines the summer eve's dew
ants follow the trail
captured
wings cast shadows over the fallen
time sips the marrow
Published 29th Jul 2014
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29th Jul 2014 8:28pm
30th Jul 2014 11:00am
Literally one of those right place - right time moments for the photograph ... I may play with another write or two for this
Thanks for the read
Thanks for the read
29th Jul 2014 9:38pm
30th Jul 2014 11:02am
I appreciate the feedback coming from you ... It was incredible seeing this powerful and majestic creature reap the rewards of a hunt
7th Aug 2014 4:31pm
Hey, Dig this man, great pic. you have an eye as well as a way with poetic words my friend... Never been good at Haiku, the rules of verse that goes into it, but I know that I like this man ,very much, take care my friend: deadwolf / Eddie
9th Aug 2014 1:59pm
Thanks for the read and comment Brotha ... It was an ultra cool moment to capture.
13th Sep 2014 8:21pm
You have a wonderful grasp of the written word as well as the ability to describe what you see. I am following your work. I love it.
13th Sep 2014 9:03pm
