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Confucius and Rumi
Confucius and Rumi:
My soul fell in love this morning,
with two men
One made the beating heart, in my chest,
happy
Another touched my troubled, and lonely mind
I’m not lonely
Comforted by their life,
I remember how, I should live mine
I could only show them love
the only way I know how
with my passion for life
Maybe thats why they are gone
There’s, would be, as deep as mine
Like whispers in the wind, I heard your voices,
I did not know your name; I never was good at remembering
Scholars told me, but I was too young to care
I wish I looked them in the eye, and listened to every word
I would never, had to have fought, my way to be here
where I have always been, I guess that is the beauty, of the circle
you end up where you are, with understanding, purpose,
It is true, I am in love with you and
I forgot who I was
Bumping into you, remembering, who I am
I can hunt; I never back out of a fight, to the death
that’s what I was taught, if there is no blood you lost,
I fight to win, or die with pride
I can give it all away, these are just things anyway,
nothing that makes me happy
I look, I see, I touch, I feel,
I smell, I taste, I hear, and silently I think
I could conquer this, to give it all away
why not, it never made me happy
there just things, anybody can obtain
But this circle
the purpose
my mind
my heart
my soul
joined with you, makes the significance
My soul, fell in love this morning,
with two men
One made the beating heart in my chest,
happy
Another touched my troubled and lonely mind
I am not so lonely
Comforted by their life,
I remember how to live
I could only show them love
the only way, I know how
with passion
Maybe thats why, they are gone
There’s would be equal, to mine
Seascape
Published 28th Jul 2014
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28th Jul 2014 11:58am
you always have some beautiful,
solid lines in your pieces, miss seascape.
i think sometimes they get lost in trying to convey every internal and external feeling you have.
maybe trying to strip away words until you're left with the bones could be helpful in getting a more concise and less wordy message across.
[my opinion and you can always tell me to shove it wherever]
"It is true I am in love with you
I forgot who I was
Bumping into you, remembering
who I am"
^^^
this really is a beautiful piece of
writing and we all deserve to have someone find us even when we're wanting to remain lost.
enjoyed xox
solid lines in your pieces, miss seascape.
i think sometimes they get lost in trying to convey every internal and external feeling you have.
maybe trying to strip away words until you're left with the bones could be helpful in getting a more concise and less wordy message across.
[my opinion and you can always tell me to shove it wherever]
"It is true I am in love with you
I forgot who I was
Bumping into you, remembering
who I am"
^^^
this really is a beautiful piece of
writing and we all deserve to have someone find us even when we're wanting to remain lost.
enjoyed xox
28th Jul 2014 5:55pm
Thank you I am so trying to be less wordy but I bumped into there words again and became excited like it was my birthday
29th Jul 2014 00:45am
29th Jul 2014 6:22am
