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Apple~
If I could shade you on a hot summer's day
all the while sending a breeze to cool you
would you whisper to me..."you're an apple
I'd love to eat"
all the while sending a breeze to cool you
would you whisper to me..."you're an apple
I'd love to eat"
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Re: Apple~
24th Jul 2014 00:34am
This is perfectly lovely, Tommie Lynn, luv :-*.
You are a formidable poet combining simplicity of form and content with powerful, deep yearning emotion. Your poetry is powerful and contains such intense depth.
You are a formidable poet combining simplicity of form and content with powerful, deep yearning emotion. Your poetry is powerful and contains such intense depth.
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24th Jul 2014 1:24pm
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24th Jul 2014 00:35am
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re: Re: Apple~
24th Jul 2014 1:26pm
I try not to over think when I'm writing,
it just kinda spills out of me. Thanks for the wonderful
comment Jack. :)
it just kinda spills out of me. Thanks for the wonderful
comment Jack. :)
Re: Apple~
24th Jul 2014 4:35am
If you cool me from the Texas heat than you're an apple I'd love to eat :) Could I have some melon too? :)
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24th Jul 2014 1:27pm
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1st Aug 2014 6:43pm
You know, I do have a yard stick...hands on the desk lol
Thank you xmar82 :)
Thank you xmar82 :)
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Anonymous
1st Aug 2014 6:25pm
Very well crafted....
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1st Aug 2014 6:43pm