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Bite
Could you?
Would you?
That is to say
If it's not too much trouble
Lean over
Please
Ahh yes
Just there
Mmm...
Now
Could you
Bite
Me
Today?
I'm craving a nibble on my neck
Just there
In that spot
Get it right and you can't imagine the
rewards: ever wanted to own a
woman, have her body your total toy?
Ever wished you knew a way to drop
her to her knees, have her pleading,
twisting, moaning? What if one bite to
her neck would grant you this and
more, one precisely placed bite could
grant you mastery?
You cannot possibly know how long
I've waited for someone who knows
And
Who will ruthlessly plunder
Gently
Tenderly
With a luscious, excruciating bite...
Would you?
That is to say
If it's not too much trouble
Lean over
Please
Ahh yes
Just there
Mmm...
Now
Could you
Bite
Me
Today?
I'm craving a nibble on my neck
Just there
In that spot
Get it right and you can't imagine the
rewards: ever wanted to own a
woman, have her body your total toy?
Ever wished you knew a way to drop
her to her knees, have her pleading,
twisting, moaning? What if one bite to
her neck would grant you this and
more, one precisely placed bite could
grant you mastery?
You cannot possibly know how long
I've waited for someone who knows
And
Who will ruthlessly plunder
Gently
Tenderly
With a luscious, excruciating bite...
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Re: Bite
22nd Jul 2014 8:39pm
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23rd Jul 2014 9:59am
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2014 9:18pm
Very nice work
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Re: Bite
22nd Jul 2014 9:28pm
Seems we have even more in common hun. Oh yes that perfect bite on the neck and shoulders is where it all begins
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23rd Jul 2014 10:02am
Thank you, lilsouthernbelle, luv :-* ~ That spot is quite a doozy, isn't it? ;-)
Re: Bite
22nd Jul 2014 10:26pm
Glad to see another fetish poem crop up. Fetishes--the paradise of sexuality! Loved to hear your vagina give such a perfect reading, too. It has such an expressive voice!
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23rd Jul 2014 10:05am
Thank you, candycrier, luv :-*. Hmmm...fetishes and paradise. My vagina thanks you for such effusive praise, luv. :-*
Re: Bite
22nd Jul 2014 10:40pm
Marvelous prose, Savaja.
It is a craving shared by many a fair lady,
addressed by too few men. So I'm told. :)
It is a craving shared by many a fair lady,
addressed by too few men. So I'm told. :)
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23rd Jul 2014 10:07am
Thank you very much, VegasPoet, luv :-* ~
I believe you are accurate in that assertion. Your sources are excellent... ;-)
I believe you are accurate in that assertion. Your sources are excellent... ;-)
Re: Bite
23rd Jul 2014 6:23am
oh hells yes, beautiful oracle... that spot where the neck meets the shoulder....
~fanning myself
much enjoyed
~fanning myself
much enjoyed
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23rd Jul 2014 10:09am
Thank you, gorgeous Snowcrystal, luv :-* ~
Fanning? I can think of better things to do with that heat...and so can Fireglacier, I'm certain.
What ARE you awaiting? Give him the poem, woman! :-*
Fanning? I can think of better things to do with that heat...and so can Fireglacier, I'm certain.
What ARE you awaiting? Give him the poem, woman! :-*
Re: Bite
23rd Jul 2014 7:31am
my most liked lines"I'm craving a nibble on my neck
Just there
In that spot "
Just there
In that spot "
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23rd Jul 2014 10:10am
Re: Bite
27th Jul 2014 10:20pm
Lovely seductive reading Savaja. Who can resist such a lovely request? Enjoyed it.
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re: Re: Bite
27th Jul 2014 10:48pm
Thank you, xmar82, luv :-* ~
I am glad you enjoyed and I am further heartened to hear you would be unable to resist such a request. It does give me hope for mankind, luv... :-*
I am glad you enjoyed and I am further heartened to hear you would be unable to resist such a request. It does give me hope for mankind, luv... :-*
Re: Bite
This started kinda Dr. Seussian :) This is an intriguing piece. I appreciate the instruction from a woman who knows sensuality. Hmmmmmm incorporating biting into the coital experience is one I will have to delicately explore. Can I start with little nibbles? :)
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5th Aug 2014 4:52am
Absolutely, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*! In fact, I encourage you to begin with nibbles and gentle nips. Not all biting is the same. Exploration is the name of the game here.
Just do not ignore this area. Kisses will work fine, luv. The rewards, you will find, can be abundant...
Just do not ignore this area. Kisses will work fine, luv. The rewards, you will find, can be abundant...
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5th Aug 2014 4:59am