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Welcome to my company
I have no wish to be your mommy
or fuck buddy
willing and able to be a friend
talk about any subject, any end
no judgement here, bub, I will not offend
so, don't ask me to suck your dick
if you want me to spend time in YOUR company
I have no wish to be your mommy
or fuck buddy
willing and able to be a friend
talk about any subject, any end
no judgement here, bub, I will not offend
so, don't ask me to suck your dick
if you want me to spend time in YOUR company
Published 12th Jul 2014
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12th Jul 2014 7:44am
I enjoyed this, especially the rhythmic structure of it. That said, I think this could use punctuation to inform the reader how to approach the pacing and highlight the enjambment. The last two lines will certainly ring in my head for a while!
