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Why?
Why is love so often bound
Constrained all round
By artificial constructs
Why not love without creating these?
Truly loving takes deep communication, absolute trust, willingness to break down barriers between communion and community.
Constrained all round
By artificial constructs
Why not love without creating these?
Truly loving takes deep communication, absolute trust, willingness to break down barriers between communion and community.
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Re: Why?
11th Jul 2014 7:02am
C'est La Vie, sweet oracle.
in an ideal world we'd have no scars, no fears, no walls... and who could love someone who wasn't flawed and battle bruised. certainly not i, i couldn't love someone who hasn't lived.
half the joy of falling in love is moving each other past artificial restraints.
ahem ~cough cough~ dr.phil exit stage left.
in an ideal world we'd have no scars, no fears, no walls... and who could love someone who wasn't flawed and battle bruised. certainly not i, i couldn't love someone who hasn't lived.
half the joy of falling in love is moving each other past artificial restraints.
ahem ~cough cough~ dr.phil exit stage left.
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re: Re: Why?
I agree absolutely, Snowcrystal, luv. :-* Certainly, 'tis nectar for philosophy and conversation. Thank you for your wisdom and insight (now, who's the erotic oracle, pray tell?).
So many myriad permutations of artificial constraints...
So many myriad permutations of artificial constraints...
Re: Why?
11th Jul 2014 7:05am
re: Re: Why?
12th Jul 2014 2:11am
So, true, Fireglacier, luv. :-* (yep, I like it :-D) The answers breed more questions faster than do rabbits in the lettuce...
Thank you.
Thank you.
Re: Why?
11th Jul 2014 7:18am
re: Re: Why?
12th Jul 2014 2:16am
Explain your meaning further taito-10, luv, please. Your phrasing intrigues. Although, I must admit to this: the very notion of breaking all love seems to me utter nonsense. Love is the answer to it all; without it, we're wholly bereft.
However, I still want to hear what you have to say on this topic. So, explicate further, please. You have my attention.
However, I still want to hear what you have to say on this topic. So, explicate further, please. You have my attention.
Re: Why?
13th Jul 2014 4:07pm
maybe...because although love knows no bounds,we give it bounds.Instead of letting it flow we catch it and cage it,then say to be this you must be that (?) :) (nice)
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re: Re: Why?
13th Jul 2014 4:17pm
Well, hashman, luv, that's true enough. :-* We certainly do tend to add those external restraints. Silly creatures, aren't we? :-p
Re: Why?
15th Jul 2014 3:57am
You have a very lovely voice that readers can listen to and follow your words with ease...
I'm really enjoying listening to your many postings....Xo
I'm really enjoying listening to your many postings....Xo
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re: Re: Why?
15th Jul 2014 4:08am
Thank you, RainC, luv :-*!
I am trying to get these done so I can go back to writing poetry. :-p
I feel like if I stop, I won't ever do them. You're a trooper listening to all of them, you gem! :-*
I'll come by and do the same for you when I finish. :-)
I am trying to get these done so I can go back to writing poetry. :-p
I feel like if I stop, I won't ever do them. You're a trooper listening to all of them, you gem! :-*
I'll come by and do the same for you when I finish. :-)
Re: Why?
16th Jul 2014 4:37am
Five star food for thought, Savaja.
Well written.
Unselfish, non-possessive love is nearly mystical.
It is an experience beyond magical.
Alas, tis why it proves elusive, difficult to locate.
But, it exists. This I know.
Well written.
Unselfish, non-possessive love is nearly mystical.
It is an experience beyond magical.
Alas, tis why it proves elusive, difficult to locate.
But, it exists. This I know.
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re: Re: Why?
16th Jul 2014 4:43am
Ah, VegasPoet, luv :-* ~
You understand me. I wondered...but you have. Thank you for that, luv. You are a gem! It does, indeed. You have my deep respect, Sir. :-*
You understand me. I wondered...but you have. Thank you for that, luv. You are a gem! It does, indeed. You have my deep respect, Sir. :-*
Re: Why?
18th Jul 2014 12:14pm
I really love the thought behind this and the question raised because love is often predicated on set norms and boundaries ... but I guess that's what makes stories like "Romeo & Juliet" and "The Bridges of Madison County" classics ...
... Wonderful thought provoking piece.
... Wonderful thought provoking piece.
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re: Re: Why?
18th Jul 2014 1:59pm
Thank you, LobodeSanPedro, luv :-*. If we are at least thinking about these concepts, then we can dialogue, which means, perhaps, things are more fluid than rigid.
As long as dialogue is possible, there is hope, eh?
As long as dialogue is possible, there is hope, eh?
Re: Why?
20th Jul 2014 10:12pm
We put these constraints on ourselves. I do agree with Vegaspoet though, it does exist but it's very hard to find. Enjoyed Savaja.
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re: Re: Why?
21st Jul 2014 2:14am
Thank you, xmar82, luv :-*.
I do think your assessment is accurate: putting constraints upon ourselves. Yes, VegasPoet does seem to see truly, eh? As do you. Thank you, again. :-*
I do think your assessment is accurate: putting constraints upon ourselves. Yes, VegasPoet does seem to see truly, eh? As do you. Thank you, again. :-*