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Crazy lady
Text conversation: July 9, 2014 unedited
You see me
Clear to the soul
Better than I see myself
You see me
I am in anguish
Tears of blood pool
Drawn from deepest recesses
Pulled from heart's blood
God help me
I can't stop this
It's poetry, isn't it?
"Maybe up 'til now, you were actively trying NOT to do this.
Yes, baby, it's poetry."
I'm going to be that crazy lady.
The one people can't talk to 'cause she's talking all funny.
You see me
Clear to the soul
Better than I see myself
You see me
I am in anguish
Tears of blood pool
Drawn from deepest recesses
Pulled from heart's blood
God help me
I can't stop this
It's poetry, isn't it?
"Maybe up 'til now, you were actively trying NOT to do this.
Yes, baby, it's poetry."
I'm going to be that crazy lady.
The one people can't talk to 'cause she's talking all funny.
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Re: Crazy lady
Anonymous
10th Jul 2014 8:48pm
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re: Re: Crazy lady
11th Jul 2014 00:00am
I think you are too effusive with praise, Jack. Everyone here is remarkable. Everyone worthy of praise. We all need and deserve those accolades in our lives, perhaps, just for taking up pen and appearing here in this place, this cavern filled with love, humanity, and poetry.
Perhaps the greatest gift given is this lesson: even in a digital age, there is still room for something as raw and visceral and intrinsically Human as poetry.
Mephistopheles, you Devil, I've rather missed you... :-*
Perhaps the greatest gift given is this lesson: even in a digital age, there is still room for something as raw and visceral and intrinsically Human as poetry.
Mephistopheles, you Devil, I've rather missed you... :-*
Re: Crazy lady
10th Jul 2014 9:53pm
You say that like crazy ladies are a negative thing... They're the best, especially with a broom or a fist full of flatware =)
Enjoyed...
Enjoyed...
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re: Re: Crazy lady
11th Jul 2014 00:09am
Fenom (DiscipleofLife), luv ~
You did elicit a wee chortle, perhaps a snort, even a fairly relentless grin. :-* I'm sure anyone around thinks I'm mad as a hatter. Ah well, I really don't give a damn... :-D
Thank you, luv.
You did elicit a wee chortle, perhaps a snort, even a fairly relentless grin. :-* I'm sure anyone around thinks I'm mad as a hatter. Ah well, I really don't give a damn... :-D
Thank you, luv.
Re: Crazy lady
11th Jul 2014 2:22am
if you speak poetry to the average person on the street, you'll probably get a weird reaction. there are many poem makers here in the underground, but we are very few in the large, unreceptive world...
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re: Re: Crazy lady
11th Jul 2014 2:30am
Thank you, JohnFeddeler ~
You cause me to ponder, ruminate, speculate. Is not there a spark of the divine fire in us all? Perhaps, the trick (no trick - feat?) is to Kindle it...
You cause me to ponder, ruminate, speculate. Is not there a spark of the divine fire in us all? Perhaps, the trick (no trick - feat?) is to Kindle it...
Re: Crazy lady
12th Jul 2014 9:06pm
...well Sanity has never been my friend , she's a bit of a bitch! haha
I enjoyed this crazy lady! Xo
Pen love~
I enjoyed this crazy lady! Xo
Pen love~
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re: Re: Crazy lady
12th Jul 2014 9:19pm
Thank you, RainC (rain1courtel), luv! :-*
She is, rather, isn't she? I'm glad you enjoyed, chica.
She is, rather, isn't she? I'm glad you enjoyed, chica.
Re: Crazy lady
18th Jul 2014 12:20pm
lol ... Well you've found the right home because this place is filled with lunatics. The best thing about smartphones is now when I walk down the street and talk to myself people think I'm on the phone with someone else ...
... I feel like I've spoken the very words you've written to myself in those moments.
Salud
... I feel like I've spoken the very words you've written to myself in those moments.
Salud
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re: Re: Crazy lady
18th Jul 2014 2:06pm
Lobode,luv :-* ~
Thank you! We are simpatico, my friend. As soon as I read that work of yours with your father in it, I felt a connection. Now, I know, brother mine. :-*
Thank you! We are simpatico, my friend. As soon as I read that work of yours with your father in it, I felt a connection. Now, I know, brother mine. :-*
Re: Crazy lady
20th Jul 2014 10:23pm
We're all a bit crazy aren't we? The voices in our heads speak their thoughts and we listen and write it all down. Sounds crazy to me. Enjoyed it.
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re: Re: Crazy lady
Xmar82, luv :-* ~
We are all a bit crazy. Perhaps, poets are a bit closer to it than others, eh?
Certainly, a good portion of what we do could be considered transcription... :-p
Thank you.
We are all a bit crazy. Perhaps, poets are a bit closer to it than others, eh?
Certainly, a good portion of what we do could be considered transcription... :-p
Thank you.