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Davey
Do we share the same sky
breathe the same air
Could the sun shine upon
my face in darkness
In the shadows of the trees
would you hear my silent whispers
Could you find me from just the
beating of my stricken heart
breathe the same air
Could the sun shine upon
my face in darkness
In the shadows of the trees
would you hear my silent whispers
Could you find me from just the
beating of my stricken heart
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Re: Davey
10th Jul 2014 4:57pm
We all need reassurance that both of us are on the same page. It's hard when you find out tha other one isn't. Hurts. Good write.
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re: Re: Davey
10th Jul 2014 5:28pm
It seems my beating heart stills but quickens
every time I see him. And the trembling in
his throat when he speaks to me tells me
he feels the same way!
Thank you xmar82 :)
every time I see him. And the trembling in
his throat when he speaks to me tells me
he feels the same way!
Thank you xmar82 :)
Re: Davey
10th Jul 2014 5:10pm
From just your beating heart, I'll find you!!
Great write and read sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write and read sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
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Re: Davey
10th Jul 2014 6:05pm
This is really beautiful, and I loved:
"In the shadows of the trees
would you hear my silent whispers"
feels like a metaphor for the secret you want to share... just awesome...
"In the shadows of the trees
would you hear my silent whispers"
feels like a metaphor for the secret you want to share... just awesome...
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