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That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
“...for this moment alone, I breathe for ”
“I'm Coming Out
I'm coming.......
Making me dance
inside........” Sade folá Assad
My eyes absorb
your battle of wills
testament against permissive
the domination of her sensuality
Which shall reign?
Which shall wipe away her scarlet-lettered tears?
Tantalizing peach nectar
mixed with fresh cream
waters gather at the crest of her brow
in the heat of an erotic steam.......
…..my eyes adore you
and the feeling's love
percolating pleasures
waves invading
increasing,
her fingers play upon
a sweeping glissando
of adagio keys
more real than make believe......
…..does she see me in her languished dreams ?
her matrix alive
with the throbbing of
a deeply carnal vibe
soft, elliptical hips
dipping north and south
shaping the lips
into passionate screams
volumes frozen in timeless sound, ......
….she brings me to the brink of my own redemption
as her river flows
shimmering, twinkling light
alternating currents,
keeping loose, keeping tight
a sweet surrender, a beautifully inspired release
.....that which my woman feels, my eyes see...Always
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Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 4:20pm
inspried painting of words wid circumstances as if those nactors ripened wid erotics
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re: Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 4:46pm
Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
Anonymous
8th Jul 2014 5:41pm
MrM,
Your peach nectaur mixed with fresh cream has indeed over filled these summer nights with an ache of sweet heat! Awesome write!
tornado
Your peach nectaur mixed with fresh cream has indeed over filled these summer nights with an ache of sweet heat! Awesome write!
tornado
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re: Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 9:15pm
Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 5:54pm
Beautiful sight eh. Love shows so much in such actions and reactions. Good read, MrM.
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re: Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 9:16pm
Yes Grace, love does highlight it all. You amaze me sometimes with your perception......
Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 7:52pm
….she brings me to the brink of my own redemption
as her river flows
shimmering, twinkling light
alternating currents,
keeping loose, keeping tight
a sweet surrender, a beautifully inspired release
.....that which my woman feels, my eyes see
so musical made me wish
I was a gal
lovely music i love to hear
when it sounds like erotica my dear
I love all things soft and sweet
as I partake with my hardened meat
all love to be eaten
we all know
musical love erotica does sow
and you sir
G L O W
with a musical flow
as upon your heart throbs
yours sample
you let flow...
and here I go
as her river flows
shimmering, twinkling light
alternating currents,
keeping loose, keeping tight
a sweet surrender, a beautifully inspired release
.....that which my woman feels, my eyes see
so musical made me wish
I was a gal
lovely music i love to hear
when it sounds like erotica my dear
I love all things soft and sweet
as I partake with my hardened meat
all love to be eaten
we all know
musical love erotica does sow
and you sir
G L O W
with a musical flow
as upon your heart throbs
yours sample
you let flow...
and here I go
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re: Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 9:19pm
"....with a musical flow
as upon your heart throbs
yours sample
you let flow...
and here I go...."
AGAIN. : ) The most unique reply I've ever gotten (I think) I appreciate it
as upon your heart throbs
yours sample
you let flow...
and here I go...."
AGAIN. : ) The most unique reply I've ever gotten (I think) I appreciate it
re: re: Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 10:13pm
U R 2222gooood sir
to appreciate
and
worthy enough
4 1 2 emulate
I state
M U S I C A L L Y
URSZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Jazzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!
to appreciate
and
worthy enough
4 1 2 emulate
I state
M U S I C A L L Y
URSZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Jazzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!
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Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 10:12pm
".....that which my woman feels, my eyes see...Always"<--as it should be! :) Two people connected so closely spiritually, can pattern senses, experiencing each others emotions.
This ink was designed beautifully! Love it! Xoxo
This ink was designed beautifully! Love it! Xoxo
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re: Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
9th Jul 2014 3:24am
Cosigning and concurring with you +1 : ) I have a wonderful lady in my life who shares my life with this type of spirituality. She causes me to live and breathe so I can relate to your point so well. Being able to *feel* her pulse beyond the physical....sigh
Thanks for seeing past the analytical and seeing the love : )
Thanks for seeing past the analytical and seeing the love : )
Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
8th Jul 2014 10:13pm
"percolating pleasures
waves invading
increasing,
her fingers play upon
a sweeping glissando
of adagio keys
more real than make believe......"<--fav.
waves invading
increasing,
her fingers play upon
a sweeping glissando
of adagio keys
more real than make believe......"<--fav.
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re: Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
9th Jul 2014 3:19am
.....glad that I found favor in your pleasure. That particular verse did cause me to "think back and remember the future" ; )
Thank you for your support, always xoxoxo
Thank you for your support, always xoxoxo
Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
10th Jul 2014 4:14pm
Love how the title fits the piece Bro. M!!!
Awesome write and read Man!!
Great ink!!
Sir Lancelott
Awesome write and read Man!!
Great ink!!
Sir Lancelott
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11th Jul 2014 4:25am
Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
10th Jul 2014 11:22pm
Experiencing through someone else's skin, empathic spiritual love-making is an incredible plateau of understanding. And from this peak you deliver well! Thank you for this write, maestro!
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re: Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
11th Jul 2014 4:27am
Loki, your commentary is always inspiring and so timely. Feels good when the reader truly connects with what you have scripted. I appreciate it : )
Re: That Which My Woman Feels, My Eyes See
12th Jul 2014 5:07am
"….she brings me to the brink of my own redemption" so well put and a theme which you well know is found in many a great artists' compositions.
Got that music and food in the top shelf again, I see!
Got that music and food in the top shelf again, I see!
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