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Wanton goddess
Alone
Darkness encapsulates
Enfolds
Encloses
Embraces
Warmth of the night
shimmers
Across lustrous shadowed skin
Whispered air currents
Breeze gently cross
Lush breasts topped by aching, peaked nipples
Light from a glimmering moon
Lovingly traces voluptuous curves
Strong thighs
Cupped between
Delicate cocoa and fuchsia folds
Musky ambrosia
Slowly
Trickles
Tiny, passionate brook
Wanton goddess
Darkness encapsulates
Enfolds
Encloses
Embraces
Warmth of the night
shimmers
Across lustrous shadowed skin
Whispered air currents
Breeze gently cross
Lush breasts topped by aching, peaked nipples
Light from a glimmering moon
Lovingly traces voluptuous curves
Strong thighs
Cupped between
Delicate cocoa and fuchsia folds
Musky ambrosia
Slowly
Trickles
Tiny, passionate brook
Wanton goddess
Published 8th Jul 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jul 2014 3:34pm
8th Jul 2014 3:33pm
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Mephistopheles ~
I know not how to answer thee. I find myself fast entrapped. On one side lies Scylla, to the other Charybdis swirls fast. How will I evade your silken net, your enticements?
You appeal to my every sense, my weakness for you grows.
I fear 'tis a failing in me to admit my rapture in your bliss.
I know not how to answer thee. I find myself fast entrapped. On one side lies Scylla, to the other Charybdis swirls fast. How will I evade your silken net, your enticements?
You appeal to my every sense, my weakness for you grows.
I fear 'tis a failing in me to admit my rapture in your bliss.
Anonymous
8th Jul 2014 6:30pm
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8th Jul 2014 11:28pm
8th Jul 2014 6:49pm
i'm just gonna come out and say it... your poetry's either giving me penis envy or turning me into a lesbian... i'll get back to you on which ;)
wanton, wilful and willing. simply steller, Savaja xo
wanton, wilful and willing. simply steller, Savaja xo
8th Jul 2014 11:31pm
Oh my, I think, why yes, I do believe, you've made me wet, my dear... ;-)
Snowcrystal, do let me know which it is, please. Either will gratify. :-*
Snowcrystal, do let me know which it is, please. Either will gratify. :-*
8th Jul 2014 6:55pm
Wonderful title and the whole poem seethes with archetypal embodiment. We know this goddess deep within our unconscious minds and will always imagine her.
8th Jul 2014 11:37pm
Candycrier, luv :-* ~
Thank you! I am honored by your deep analysis. I feel as though in the presence of Jung himself, an honor indeed.
This is the eternal circle.
Thank you! I am honored by your deep analysis. I feel as though in the presence of Jung himself, an honor indeed.
This is the eternal circle.
8th Jul 2014 8:24pm
8th Jul 2014 11:40pm
Ahhh, there you are my Granite man, raunchy as ever! :-*
You say something like this and make me want to say something like: wish I could have tasted it...
You say something like this and make me want to say something like: wish I could have tasted it...
10th Jul 2014 10:49am
12th Jul 2014 2:19am
7th Aug 2014 6:52am
Savaja, this is amazing. Your use of the this passage:
"Cupped between
Delicate cocoa and fuchsia folds
Musky ambrosia
Slowly
Trickles
Tiny, passionate brook"
Is stunning, pure ecstasy! I want to dip my cupped hand into that "Tiny Brook" and take a long drink from what flows there.
Bravisima mia bella poeta!
"Cupped between
Delicate cocoa and fuchsia folds
Musky ambrosia
Slowly
Trickles
Tiny, passionate brook"
Is stunning, pure ecstasy! I want to dip my cupped hand into that "Tiny Brook" and take a long drink from what flows there.
Bravisima mia bella poeta!
7th Aug 2014 7:22am
Thank you very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv :-*.
You render unto me such jubilant and ecstatic praise, luv, that you cause me to become flustered, though I blush in sheer bliss. Thank you again, luv, for your accolades. :-*
You render unto me such jubilant and ecstatic praise, luv, that you cause me to become flustered, though I blush in sheer bliss. Thank you again, luv, for your accolades. :-*
