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No Port To Engage
I really need you right now
your sound reason
for this middle aged adolescent
poof your not to be found
never there when I need you most
why I feel such a closeness to you?
maybe it's because we're the same age
possibly your true life stories
I don't know I just feel a connection to you
you've gotten under my skin
festering there like an unwanted appendage
though there none the less I could do without a heart
I love it when you're here
miss you when you're gone
but like a boat on an endlessly journey
you won't be in any one port for long
your sound reason
for this middle aged adolescent
poof your not to be found
never there when I need you most
why I feel such a closeness to you?
maybe it's because we're the same age
possibly your true life stories
I don't know I just feel a connection to you
you've gotten under my skin
festering there like an unwanted appendage
though there none the less I could do without a heart
I love it when you're here
miss you when you're gone
but like a boat on an endlessly journey
you won't be in any one port for long
Published 6th Jul 2014
| Edited 7th Jul 2014
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6th Jul 2014 11:34pm
Felt this deep Crim. Thank you for sharing. As always, a beautiful write. :)
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2014 00:57am
Sweet Crim......I so am feeling this. Exactly how I feel at this moment. Give so much and get nothing back. Make sure we are there for them in all ways......they seem to just not care back. Touching write as you can tell. Glad to see you back again. Luv and hugs always your way. Xo :)
7th Jul 2014 5:23pm
I've not been fair to this person in this write lovely Flower they are just my friend and they've been there for me this is a slightly selfish write thank you kind lady :) with love Crim
7th Jul 2014 1:19am
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7th Jul 2014 6:21am
Great title smooth Crim - and proof that nothing and no one ever leaves us - till they're forgotten
7th Jul 2014 5:25pm
7th Jul 2014 3:08pm
You've pursed a sweet wind in the sails of a yearning heart. Poof, and you're here to swell our emotions once more. Thank you, sweet Crim for sharing your poetic essence with us!
7th Jul 2014 5:26pm
beautiful Angel forgive my absence I have no place to talk about not being there when needed thank you for the love.. with love Crim
Anonymous
7th Jul 2014 4:06pm
Crim,
The journey of life is one to be savored. Ever more by sea! Awesome write!
tornado
The journey of life is one to be savored. Ever more by sea! Awesome write!
tornado
7th Jul 2014 5:27pm
7th Jul 2014 5:46pm
Looks like ur STILL tortured by the same
one as before...hope he realizes how deeply you yearn for him, n that he's deserving of it...
Very moving ink.
one as before...hope he realizes how deeply you yearn for him, n that he's deserving of it...
Very moving ink.
7th Jul 2014 6:02pm
he's just a friend and I've been a bit selfish with this write.. thank you for the support and love :) with love Crim
8th Jul 2014 9:30am
Poof!
Lovely Lass, here's trusting he appears for you.
You are worthy.
This is heartfelt, even if a bit selfish. :) Your writing talent shines.
Hugs,
Chad
Lovely Lass, here's trusting he appears for you.
You are worthy.
This is heartfelt, even if a bit selfish. :) Your writing talent shines.
Hugs,
Chad
8th Jul 2014 10:10am
