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the darkness
the darkness in me.
the pain I have endured.
the anger tearing at me.
the tears I have shed.
the horror i have seen.
why...
why me...
all I want is a answer...
I just want to know.
why.
how.
when.
the pain I have endured.
the anger tearing at me.
the tears I have shed.
the horror i have seen.
why...
why me...
all I want is a answer...
I just want to know.
why.
how.
when.
Published 31st Mar 2011
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31st Mar 2011 4:15am
Not bad, not bad. Got a bit of a flow, though not as much as one might like, and though the subject might be cliched, it's also relatable. However, it's nowhere near extreme content, so if you can change that, that'd probably be good.
3rd Apr 2011 11:20pm
7th May 2011 8:32pm
