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Interior
I'm a city guy
I don't leave town much
A few days here and there
Just to reclaim the fresh air vibe
But truth be told
I need the city interior to feel safe
All the noise and grit and craziness
Defines me
The wild times are behind me
Memories that say I lived a life
Graphic and indelibly defined
Now it's a quiet corner amidst the madness
My city is my flesh
Traveling from appointment to appointment
Cell phones, pen and paper
Road salesman coming to you next
I don't leave town much
A few days here and there
Just to reclaim the fresh air vibe
But truth be told
I need the city interior to feel safe
All the noise and grit and craziness
Defines me
The wild times are behind me
Memories that say I lived a life
Graphic and indelibly defined
Now it's a quiet corner amidst the madness
My city is my flesh
Traveling from appointment to appointment
Cell phones, pen and paper
Road salesman coming to you next
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Re: Interior
26th Jun 2014 1:12am
A truly stunning piece of reflection, really loved this, one of my favourites x
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Re: Interior
26th Jun 2014 1:17am
Thx Glass
I've been trying to write this for awhile
Glad you like, your validation with the RL add fills me
xx
I've been trying to write this for awhile
Glad you like, your validation with the RL add fills me
xx
Re: Interior
Anonymous
26th Jun 2014 1:28am
like it
esp the line "My city is my flesh"
esp the line "My city is my flesh"
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Re: Interior
26th Jun 2014 2:00am
thanks for sharing a bit more of yourself.....
got to agree with you....there's something captivating about living in the city....may be time for me to go back....
its always good when we can define who we are, where we belong......
got to agree with you....there's something captivating about living in the city....may be time for me to go back....
its always good when we can define who we are, where we belong......
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Re: Interior
26th Jun 2014 2:03am
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26th Jun 2014 2:07am
City life puts your edge back on.
I think everyone should do city life somewhere in their life cycle
I think everyone should do city life somewhere in their life cycle
Re: Interior
26th Jun 2014 2:04am
Thx K
I'm not a people lover but I'm dedicated and work really hard for my customers. They are pretty good to me.
My other poetry site contains poems I publish here and clean up to work on the other site. Rest assured, you're getting my juice first ...
I'm not a people lover but I'm dedicated and work really hard for my customers. They are pretty good to me.
My other poetry site contains poems I publish here and clean up to work on the other site. Rest assured, you're getting my juice first ...
Re: Interior
26th Jun 2014 2:15am
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the streets, the streets
who thinks
to curb
yeah, "The wild times are behind me"
I liked this.
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the streets, the streets
who thinks
to curb
yeah, "The wild times are behind me"
I liked this.
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