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IF YOU LOVE ME, HURT ME
If you love me
Hurt me
Let me feel the wrath of your jealously
So I should know I’m your property
Pledged to you for eternity
Scratch & bite, slice & dice, kick & strike, show me no mercy
Rebuke my insolent perverse puerility
Magistrate your matriarchal authority
If you love
Punish me
I petition your feminist audacity
I need your disciplinarian authority
To purge my disingenuous iniquities
Upon my flesh declare your sovereignty
Chastise me to you’re satiated completely
Demand I comply willingly
If you love me
Hurt me
Justice adjudicated swiftly
Affirms that you love me
So don’t hesitate, punish me quickly
And whilst you do
Know how much I love you
Hurt me
Let me feel the wrath of your jealously
So I should know I’m your property
Pledged to you for eternity
Scratch & bite, slice & dice, kick & strike, show me no mercy
Rebuke my insolent perverse puerility
Magistrate your matriarchal authority
If you love
Punish me
I petition your feminist audacity
I need your disciplinarian authority
To purge my disingenuous iniquities
Upon my flesh declare your sovereignty
Chastise me to you’re satiated completely
Demand I comply willingly
If you love me
Hurt me
Justice adjudicated swiftly
Affirms that you love me
So don’t hesitate, punish me quickly
And whilst you do
Know how much I love you
Published 23rd Jun 2014
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23rd Jun 2014 11:08am
an ingenious bit of writing.....
while i'll not get on my soapbox of equating love to physical abuse...
what i see is someone wanting love and attention from a not so attentive partner...and they'll go to great lengths to get it...
just my interpretation.....
love the name snugglebuck....at odds with 'hurt me'...
who could hurt a snugglebuck....
while i'll not get on my soapbox of equating love to physical abuse...
what i see is someone wanting love and attention from a not so attentive partner...and they'll go to great lengths to get it...
just my interpretation.....
love the name snugglebuck....at odds with 'hurt me'...
who could hurt a snugglebuck....
23rd Jun 2014 1:47pm
Thank you for your kind critique. As for who would want to hurt a snugglebuck, I could introduce you to few x's that would love to have the chance.
23rd Jun 2014 3:39pm
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28th Jun 2014 5:55am
I just love how your words all flow so nicely. The composition, the meaning, it all comes together beautifully. I'm amazed at your talent.
5th Jul 2014 6:07am
Mmmmm.....a perfect bedtime story. Just needed to b whispered n my ear. Loved it hun
Hugs
Belle
Hugs
Belle
5th Jul 2014 9:57am
15th Aug 2014 10:28pm
gently does it
but this one loves it
so kick her with your hammer so hard
she will
hurt burst and restart
like a petrol stuck fluid wanting
kicked-start car
and read this
thank you so very much
the ink ensues
from guys like you
who love ere
they the inevitably
irresistably
evidentally
naturally
comfortably do
that what they quickly do
that alone is so thoughtful of you
any woman gal young old teen and etc
would for it alone LOVE you
and say love
hear we lay for you
but this one loves it
so kick her with your hammer so hard
she will
hurt burst and restart
like a petrol stuck fluid wanting
kicked-start car
and read this
thank you so very much
the ink ensues
from guys like you
who love ere
they the inevitably
irresistably
evidentally
naturally
comfortably do
that what they quickly do
that alone is so thoughtful of you
any woman gal young old teen and etc
would for it alone LOVE you
and say love
hear we lay for you
16th Aug 2014 3:48am
Oh dear! Such a profound compliment, its rendered me speechless. (Gulp!)
Thank you.
Thank you.
16th Aug 2014 4:53pm
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